Question

PLEASE CRITICISE YEEET






A boy and his dog. Nothing else was needed a boy and his dog. Mans best friend. A boy and his dog, Nothing else was needed. A boy and his dog. Mans best friend.

He was walking home from school in the 2nd grade. a husky, just a puppy, came right then. he looked scared, like he was just hit. The boy took im home and asked his mom if he could keep him.

A boy and his dog. Nothing else was needed. A boy and his dog, mans best friend. A boy and his dog, nothing else was needed, a boy and his dog, mans best friend.

He was walking home. in the 6th grade. His dog came up to meet him noticed he had bruises. The dog wimpered, the boy said," nothing is wrong, just some kid at school who had bad feelings"

A boy and his dog, nothing else was needed. a boy and his dog, mans best friend. a boy and his dog, nothing else was needed, a boy and his dog, mand best friend.

He was walking home. in the 11th grade. His dog did not arrive worried the boy sick. He ran back home. His momma waited. There was a vet and he kew something was wrong.

A boy and his dog, nothing else was needed, a boy and his dog, mans best friend. a boy ans his dog, nothing else was needed, a boy and his dog, mans best friend.

He was walking from work, when he took a detour. Wen to a stone, and shed some tears. He took a nearvy flower, layed it at the base and said "ill miss you forever".

Answer 1

@sxdsouls

Answer 2

crying mentally and physically

Answer 3

that twas the goal

Answer 4

I would like to see that turned into a book,prolly for little kids would be enjoyable.

Answer 5

ALL MY SONGS ARE BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKS REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEee (sigh) thanks for the criticism

Answer 6

Great Job bro!

Answer 7

it's good if you ask me.

Answer 8

Thank you both!

Answer 9

Nice

Answer 10

book

Answer 11

bro the feels

Answer 12

it's nice. From what i've seen ab you, this is very nice and seems to fit you. Kind of like repetitive for me, but overall, it's nice ! Great job

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
it's nice. From what i've seen ab you, this is very nice and seems to fit you. Kind of like repetitive for me, but overall, it's nice ! Great job
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ya i have 2 issues. it being repititive, and apparantly its a book. thank you!

Answer 14

OMG it made me cry. Anyways it's really good ❤️❤️❤️ I love it. U should write books