“Life”
While you Decline to Cry life lives,
The Ground shakes and sky falls but not one thing can change about how I feel,
As you sit there in tears your mind fills up with all the life worries,
As you wonder if your going to be good enough for him you cry and cry,
Not one thing will change in life I say,
life is full of sorrowful times and also happy times but you are just one of them,
a new light falls on the world around us,
on our experiences and relationships, intensifying the sense of everything we live what was left of us.

Question

“Life”
While you Decline to Cry life lives,
The Ground shakes and sky falls but not one thing can change about how I feel,
As you sit there in tears your mind fills up with all the life worries,
As you wonder if your going to be good enough for him you cry and cry,
Not one thing will change in life I say,
 life is full of sorrowful times and also happy times but you are just one of them,
 a new light falls on the world around us, 
on our experiences and relationships, intensifying the sense of everything we live what was left of us.

MiraAngel · Answer

Awww It's so great! It's full of emotion and feeling. I can really connect to your work because of the emotion in it. It's great! Let me know when you post another! I usually write some of these types of things so I really understand and I really appreciate the emotion and work put into it. Great work! :)

LandonGoma · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @MiraAngel
Awww It's so great! It's full of emotion and feeling. I can really connect to your work because of the emotion in it. It's great! Let me know when you post another! I usually write some of these types of things so I really understand and I really appreciate the emotion and work put into it. Great work! :)
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Thank you Im actually working on another right now!!

MiraAngel · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @LandonGoma
$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @MiraAngel
Awww It's so great! It's full of emotion and feeling. I can really connect to your work because of the emotion in it. It's great! Let me know when you post another! I usually write some of these types of things so I really understand and I really appreciate the emotion and work put into it. Great work! :)
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Thank you Im actually working on another right now!!
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That's great! Tag me to it or dm me when u complete it! =)
If u want I can send the link to my work in ur dms

Timmyspu · Answer

I like it

LandonGoma · Answer

thank you and sure i'd like that