Question

happy dog song pls criticize






walking along the road, a young dog walks home, to his house up on the hill, where his sick owner layed still.

The dog was just a pupy, when he was adopted. brought to the shelter, because his other family didnt want him. He was overjoyed, at the new owners, and never wanted to leave. He was taught cool tricks and learned to be, the greatest dog he could ever be.

Walking on the road, a yound dog walks home, to his house up on the hill, where his owner greeted him still.

2 months had passed, when his sickness grew amass, then suddenly a knock on the door, it was his neighbor george. He had brought the whole town with treats and food and water tap, the owner was overjoyed, and the dog sat still. Then came, a big man with suitcase with a red mark. He opened it up, then 2 hours later, the owner was up.

Walking on the road, a yound dog walks home, to his house up on the hill, where his owner ran to him still.

Answer 1

@sxdsouls

Answer 2

Sounds good!

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TwilightSparkle24
Sounds good!
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tank u

Answer 4

Empty mpt mt

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Yunikon
Empty
mpt
mt
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???

Answer 6

U need to become a author,This sounds like a good book

Answer 7

its empty

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TwilightSparkle24
Sounds good!
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tank u
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your welcome

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
U need to become a author,This sounds like a good book
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REEEEEEEEEEE AL MY SONGS ARE BOOOOOOOOOKS thanks

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Yunikon
its empty
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how so?

Answer 11

the last thing still says empty because there is nothing there

Answer 12

LOL BOOK FRKLJEKLFJLKE
Kirby tears of joy, You needa become a song writer or author- I DONT KNOW ITS AMAZING JKFJRF

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Yunikon
the last thing still says empty because there is nothing there
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im not sure what you mean

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
LOL BOOK FRKLJEKLFJLKE
Kirby tears of joy, You needa become a song writer or author- I DONT KNOW ITS AMAZING JKFJRF
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thank you!

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
LOL BOOK FRKLJEKLFJLKE
Kirby tears of joy, You needa become a song writer or author- I DONT KNOW ITS AMAZING JKFJRF
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thank you!
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<3

Answer 16

oihso[ihafe[owijeopu omg

Answer 17

ok so there is empty ok then mpty still pronunced the same and mt then there is no letters there so therefore its empty

Answer 18

noice

Answer 19

This made me sad but happy... emotional puppy song-

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nevaehhh
This made me sad but happy... emotional puppy song-
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Yass! It did!

Answer 21

I loved it! It was a rollercoaster of emotions though

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Yunikon
ok so there is empty ok then mpty still pronunced the same and mt then there is no letters there so therefore its empty
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
😳

Answer 23

Nice

Answer 24

Cool!

Answer 25

It sounds coolio so far

Answer 26

it's pretty good!!

Answer 27

That's really good.