Is this a good essay

Have you ever read the poeme’s “A Blessing” by James Wright and “Predators” by Linda Hogan? We will be sharing the similarities and differences from these two pomes. A difference is that they use different animals like ponies and cats, dogs, and foxes. A simulartie is that they are both calm and peaceful poems.

Let's explore the similarities in the poems “A Blessing” and “Predators” First, In the poem “Predators” it states “while the vixen is in the sun she bows down to my feline and good dog friends” This mans that the vixen does not want to bother or hurt any of the other animals. In “A Blessing” the horses did not want to hurt the people. Just like they said in “Predators” The last simulartie is that they both share the same qualities. For example, the people both think that the animals share kindness.

Let's discover the differences between the two poems “A Blessing” and “Predators'' In “A Blessing and “Predators” the animals act differently at some points. For example the vixen bows down to let the dog her feline friends know that she shows no harm. The person would never know that is what the vixen was trying to say. We humans wouldn't exactly know that because animal reactions are different from us humans. In the poem “A Blessing” the human walks over to the fence where they see three ponies. The people see that the ponies love each other no matter what. The ponies also nuzzle the humans hand and that's when they realize that the ponies mean to show no harm. The reactions are different because the vixen bows down to the others to let them know that she showed no harm. When the ponies nuzzled their hand they were trying to be nice and kind. As you can see the poems “A Blessing and “Predators” react very differently even though they mean no harm.

To bring this to a conclusion we can tell that both poems have many similarities and differences. Such as their reactions and how people and animals react. Also The animals don't want to harm anyone they just want to be nice. In this poem we concluded that both poems share many similarities and differences.

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Is this a good essay

Have you ever read the poeme’s “A Blessing” by James Wright  and “Predators” by Linda Hogan? We will be sharing the similarities and differences from these two pomes. A difference is that they use different animals like ponies and cats, dogs, and foxes. A simulartie is that they are both calm and peaceful poems.

Let's explore the similarities in the poems “A Blessing” and “Predators”  First, In the poem “Predators”  it states “while the vixen is in the sun she bows down to my feline and good dog friends” This mans that the vixen does not want to bother or hurt  any of the other animals. In “A Blessing” the horses did not want to hurt the people. Just like they said in “Predators” The last simulartie is that they both share the same qualities. For example, the people both think that the animals share kindness.

Let's discover the differences between the two poems “A Blessing” and “Predators'' In “A Blessing and “Predators” the animals act differently at some points. For example the vixen bows down to let the dog her feline friends know that she shows no harm. The person would never know that is what the vixen was trying to say. We humans wouldn't exactly know that because animal reactions are different from us humans. In the poem “A Blessing” the human walks over to the fence where they see three ponies. The people see that the ponies love each other no matter what. The ponies also nuzzle the humans hand and that's when they realize that the ponies mean to show no harm. The reactions are different  because the vixen bows down to the others to let them know that she showed no harm.  When the ponies nuzzled their hand they were trying to be nice and kind. As you can see the poems “A Blessing and “Predators” react very differently even though they mean no harm.

To bring this to a  conclusion we can tell that both poems  have many similarities and differences. Such as their reactions and how people and animals react. Also The animals don't want to harm anyone they just want to be nice.  In this poem we concluded that both poems share many similarities and differences.

Nothere · Answer

From what I think yeah it's a great essay!

CocoCammron · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @Nothere
From what I think yeah it's a great essay!
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Thank u

bella345 · Answer

yeah amazing

cpl106 · Answer

from what i was reading it was all good till the conclusion

CocoCammron · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @cpl106
from what i was reading it was all good till the conclusion
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Ok i'll change it

cpl106 · Answer

no no keep it

cpl106 · Answer

the conclusion is good hold up ill show you

CocoCammron · Answer

Ok

cpl106 · Answer

To bring this to a  conclusion we can tell that both poems have many similarities and differences. Such as their reactions and how people and animals react. Also, The animals don't want to harm anyone they just want to be nice.  In this poem, we concluded that both poems share many similarities and differences.

okay, the beginning is good right, okay after you finished the first two lines you start the line with "also" which you should never do. go with something like "therefore" "hence forward" "moreever"

CocoCammron · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @cpl106
To bring this to a  conclusion we can tell that both poems have many similarities and differences. Such as their reactions and how people and animals react. Also, The animals don't want to harm anyone they just want to be nice.  In this poem, we concluded that both poems share many similarities and differences.

okay, the beginning is good right, okay after you finished the first two lines you start the line with "also" which you should never do. go with something like "therefore" "hence forward" "moreever"
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Thank you

cpl106 · Answer

also check youre spelling and making sure every thing needs capitlazied and check yore punction becuase in some spots its double spaced adn i dont know if you can be counted off for it, just trying to help the best i can but other than those issues youre writing is amazing and i lowkey admire it

CocoCammron · Answer

Thank you

cpl106 · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @CocoCammron
Thank you
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anytime

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

Yes this looks interesting plus it is a nice start to a book like writing is the start of the a book and a book has a good beginning to it

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

is a story

CocoCammron · Answer

Thank you all

cpl106 · Answer

good luck and just tag me or dm anytime you need help on essays or anything but math

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

Np