Question

I write poetry. And I was wondering if you guys could tell me how it sounds.

Hiraeth

Homesickness, For a home you can’t return to, or that never was

My hiraeth is you.
You’re my home I can’t return to.
Or once never was there.
I pretend that there once was a home for us.
Only to be disappointed that there never was one, to begin with.
My sweet hiraeth.
I can’t help but close my eyes and think of me being in your arms.
Comfy in our little bed, fireplace running, sweet bird humming.
Watching your sweet smile as I take deep breaths in, smelling your sweet smell.
Locking it in my head.
My Dear Hiraeth
I love you dearly
But this home, was never there to begin with.

Answer 1

omg you did really good.

Answer 2

It's very amazing I also write so I know that this writing piece is one in million you should read some of mines one day.

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @babygurlcrip
omg you did really good.
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Thank you!

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LandonGoma
It's very amazing I also write so I know that this writing piece is one in million you should read some of mines one day.
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Will do!

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BabydollBlake
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @babygurlcrip
omg you did really good.
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Thank you!
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you're welcome! you could write some more.