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I got a story for you all but I was just bored so gimme some mercy.

Once a sweet child cried on her birthday. Her mother asked "what's wrong?" She looked at her in her eyes and simply said..."im okay" and smiled. Well as the child grew older she seemed to feel insecure and lonely. So then the girl's mother got mean after she had remarried to a lazy husband. The child who was now a teenager had been abused sexually, physically, and mentally. She then started to cry more and more, some people would call her depressed. And she found a person who gave her light, a new beginning. The person who loved her for who she was. And though she had lost a lot of weight and got taller, she felt like she wasn't good enough. The person she knew talked to her everyday, but the only problem was his girlfriend. Now the girl wasn't the "steal your mans" type but she really loved this person. So basically she asked how the boy's girlfriend was, and then eventually the boy asked his girlfriend to marry her. Now the girl acted so happy for the boy knowing that deep inside she would never get into his heart. So the boy and her girlfriend split up one day, and her excuse was "not ready yet". The girl comforted the boy in this time trying not to be pushy with things. Eventually he had confessed to her, and she had done the same. So they lived to be together. But one day....THEY GET MARRIED.

Did ya enjoy my story?

Answer 1

i like it 10/10

Answer 2

Yes, it was so good! :)

Answer 3

but why the husband had to be lazy lol

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lazyking4life
but why the husband had to be lazy lol
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"totally not a true story about anyones life or anything"

Answer 5

Did you mean to put him on this: the boy asked his girlfriend to marry her.
lol

Answer 6

Idek- my brain is just about everywhere today

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sophia333
Idek- my brain is just about everywhere today
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Oh ok lol

Answer 8

Great story!!! Continue writing more in your free time and you can make a whole lot of money for making a best-seller!!

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @IMURDADDY4EVER
Great story!!! Continue writing more in your free time and you can make a whole lot of money for making a best-seller!!
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Thanks! This was more of a biography type story though, but maybe thats not a bad idea!

Answer 10

wow super awesome story

Answer 11

@Downpour17

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yaz
wow super awesome story
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Thanks you

Answer 13

GUYS HELP ME TAG SOMEONE @Downpour17

Answer 14

OI STAP SPAMMING ME

Answer 15

This is very well written. Good job writing this :)

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Downpour17
This is very well written. Good job writing this :)
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Np ;)

Answer 17

Thats really good, good job.

Answer 18

it's good

Answer 19

a little cliche, but overall i like it!

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
a little cliche, but overall i like it!
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Thats my life story though- XDDDD

Answer 21

Damn. U've really gotten bored

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sophia333
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
a little cliche, but overall i like it!
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Thats my life story though- XDDDD
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oop XDDDDD

Answer 23

XDDDDDDDDDDDD

Answer 24

damn

Answer 25

goodddddddddddddddddd

Answer 26

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sophia333
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lazyking4life
but why the husband had to be lazy lol
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"totally not a true story about anyones life or anything"
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if you need to talk to someone, i am here. i know i dont know you and you dont know me, but i am here if you need someone.

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sophia333
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lazyking4life
but why the husband had to be lazy lol
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"totally not a true story about anyones life or anything"
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lol ok

Answer 28

ahhh the ending was just given away. It'd be better with more detail at the ending. However, i love this story. I think many people can relate to this and it's pretty nice. Great job, just maybe add more detail to help the reader really visualize it and feel it more ya know?

Answer 29

It was pretty good! I feel like someone can really get into something like that!

Answer 30

woahh! its cool

Answer 31

it was ćòöł
but as maddie sed
u should add more detail
but good job!

Answer 32

that's a pretty good one!! I love it! <3