Question

I made a new poem and wanted to post it here. Any thoughts on it?

Speaking.
I’m just speaking now.
Not screaming, not pleading.
Speaking.
I want you to hear me when I say “Listen”
I want you to pay attention to my words.
I’m speaking.
I want you to know what you have caused.
Your attention span lacks when I am speaking.
You don’t see the pain you have caused me, because you don’t listen when I am….
Speaking.

Answer 1

thats really good

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @poopi
thats really good
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Thank you!