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i would like feed bak on this becuase im getting graded on this in english

i been through so much I can't show without someone leaving. 12 counselors gone no one can help. Its been a long journey, my family and friends, the people I care about, they all leave once they find out - That my thoughts are dangerous, I'm finna be critical, I aint too political. My friend zone is declining. I might know what is mind over mind. I think I'll never be great, I think will always be hated. - And I don't understand why my mother left - like - She started the depression, and that led to compression. The search begins fir the happiness, but it never ends. Maybe i was destined to be alone, or am i just a clone? - I have so many burdens I gotta be quiet and look around. - And its amazing watching these people explaining why they are depressed - like - you are depressed because your parents took your phone - Damn y'all have no idea what depression is like - you constantly lose people because of it - my life crashes and I guess in poison to only if you knew all the pain that i think about. another girl got me tripping i started smoking to drown out my thoughts now im with this girl lets not get hurt this time, she makes me smile when im down i better not drown and over think this, her smile makes me wanna kiss her her eyes want me to marry her, her luagh i could hear on repeat, ive had my heart broken two many times, im loosing my mind, Oreos feelinsgs but i agree with my feelings currently, only if she knew all the pain ive gone threw the Oreos she would have seen me do, my own family doesnt regonise me anymore, i dont know what i want to do or need to do, in my head im over complicate becuase of these thoughts i cant take the pain anymore feeling like im gonna be helpless one reason i feel happy is becusae of her now lets hope and pray she doesnt leave i know im a burden but she is gonna be the girl i marry