Question

Things to be said

I watch you as you screw them over
As you play with there hearts as you did mine
Leaving a path of destruction behind you
But not having a care in the world
The crying, the pain it gives you a laugh
You see others pain as your victory
Taking each persons heart one by one
Including my own and shattering it
There was a time these people loved you hell there was a time I loved you
Now I sit and watch you tear apart others lives for the sheer fun of it
The true definition of the devil in the skin of an angel
The true definition of everything isn't s it seems
Now i've collected my thoughts only to realize bringing them to you
Wouldn't mean a thing to you Just another broken thing trying to be fixed
Some things were better left unsaid Now I'll say those things
Your a selfish no good one the rotten apple that fell too far from the tree
your hurt so you hurt who the hell gave you the authority to hurt people like that
Leaving your path of destruction
TAKING the only happiness they had left damn the only happiness I thought I'd had
I look into your face no seeing you wince while
I explain this to your face realizing it ha taken affect Tears running down your face now now realizing ive hit a nerve I walk away not caring of you pain as you did to me you broke me I simply called you out

Answer 1

Teacher told me to write sum sad dis good?

Answer 2

Yes In my opinion it is good, :)

Answer 3

its good.

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxxFrancisco14xx
Can I get best response please?
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sure

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie
its good.
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Thank you

Answer 6

Oh wow.. I like it but it's pretty sad. Is it based off a true story?

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Jayden15
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie
its good.
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Thank you
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ywww

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxxFrancisco14xx
Yes In my opinion it is good, :)
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thank you

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Convert
Oh wow.. I like it but it's pretty sad. Is it based off a true story?
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Yes it is based of a true story I only write true things and feelings I write from da heart

Answer 10

This is Amazing keep up the good work

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxDeppressionxx
This is Amazing keep up the good work
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Thank youuu

Answer 12

Hmm, it is nice. Some grammatical and spelling errors, but it's alright. Lots of emotion. If the goal was to write something "sad" i'd say you did a good job. The pain can be felt by the reader, so great job conveying those feelings (:

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
Hmm, it is nice. Some grammatical and spelling errors, but it's alright. Lots of emotion. If the goal was to write something "sad" i'd say you did a good job. The pain can be felt by the reader, so great job conveying those feelings (:
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no need for technicality

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Jayden15
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Convert
Oh wow.. I like it but it's pretty sad. Is it based off a true story?
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Yes it is based of a true story I only write true things and feelings I write from da heart
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Oh wow.. I'm so sorry you had to experience that. Emotional pain is always the worst. :/

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
Hmm, it is nice. Some grammatical and spelling errors, but it's alright. Lots of emotion. If the goal was to write something "sad" i'd say you did a good job. The pain can be felt by the reader, so great job conveying those feelings (:
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Yea my spelling is good but I type fast and forgot to check back Thanks for the feedback

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Convert
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Jayden15
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Convert
Oh wow.. I like it but it's pretty sad. Is it based off a true story?
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Yes it is based of a true story I only write true things and feelings I write from da heart
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Oh wow.. I'm so sorry you had to experience that. Emotional pain is always the worst. :/
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It's fine I'm a better person now from it

Answer 17

They posted it so i gave an honest answer but mk xD, but yh, you're welcome. Also, it's a little short. It'd be nice to read something a bit longer that you write. Not necessarily this. Anything works. You're a good writer (:

Answer 18

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Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Jayden15
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Convert
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Jayden15
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Convert
Oh wow.. I like it but it's pretty sad. Is it based off a true story?
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Yes it is based of a true story I only write true things and feelings I write from da heart
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Oh wow.. I'm so sorry you had to experience that. Emotional pain is always the worst. :/
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It's fine I'm a better person now from it
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Yeah, every experience like that you have makes you a stronger person if you recover from it right.

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
They posted it so i gave an honest answer but mk xD, but yh, you're welcome. Also, it's a little short. It'd be nice to read something a bit longer that you write. Not necessarily this. Anything works. You're a good writer (:
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Ohh anytime I write things all the time

Answer 21

Wooaahh I have goosebumps now ig it could be because it's kinda cold in my house too but this is great!

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shayla
Wooaahh I have goosebumps now ig it could be because it's kinda cold in my house too but this is great!
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Thank you very much

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Jayden15
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shayla
Wooaahh I have goosebumps now ig it could be because it's kinda cold in my house too but this is great!
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Thank you very much
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Ofcc

Answer 24

I'm trying not to write to many sad
things but it's what comes to me

Answer 25

I think this is rlly good

Answer 26

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @kaleighh533
I think this is rlly good
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i could not agree more

Answer 27

Yeah this is pretty sad. Good job!

Answer 28

ćööł

Answer 29

kinda a lot of reading ima get sum help @CocoCammron99

Answer 30

Cool

Answer 31

I love it I think it is really good

Answer 32

ikr

Answer 33

lol

Answer 34

ur rlly good love it ice job! You should like give it to like a local art store and see if it sells!

Answer 35

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BrokenMoon
ur rlly good love it ice job! You should like give it to like a local art store and see if it sells!
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Thank you very much I love writing i'm actually writing a story rn