Question

Please tell me if its good its a sample of my book btw

Answer 1

My name is Jackson, Jackson mires to be exact. It’s almost prom but I have to move. My girlfriend Becca is so excited for prom though, but when I tell her I’m moving she’s gonna be crushed! “Okay, calm down Jackson, calm down.” said his best friend Liam. “How am I going to tell her that I’m moving from Virginia to Vermont 6 whole states away?!” asked Jackson. “I don’t know, why are you asking me a bunch of questions that I don’t know the answers to?!” Liam said, but before Liam or Jackson could speak the girls snuck up on them again
“Hey Jackson.” said Becca. “Hi Liam” said her bff Luna “Oh hey guys.” said Liam. “Ummm…. Becca, can I talk to you alone real quick?” Jackson asked nervously. “Sure?” Becca said, looking really confused in the hallway.
When Liam and Luna were finally out of view Jackson nervously started talking.“Becca I know we were gonna go to prom together, but I’m moving to Vermont I’m so sorry I don’t even want to move.”said Jackson slowly. ‘But...but you promised.”’ I know I did but I have to move”When she heard that she started to get bright red eyes like she was holding back millions of tears and turned around then faster than the speed of light she ran down the hall and turned to the left to go into the nearest girls bathroom.“I am a horrible person!” he mumbled.
. . .
When I got home the boring,old,rusty,white moving truck was already there, people were already putting our stuff inside. When I got inside it looked bare except for the bedrooms. When he saw his mom packing towels into a box he went over to her and said “Hey mom can I go over to Liams?” “Sure honey but make sure to be home by 4:30p.m to pack up your room okay.” “Okay mom.” He looked at his phone to see what time it was. 4:00.
He got all the way to the door when his mom came up behind him and said “Jackson remember you’re supposed to leave your phone here and take your watch” Ugh… I forgot we’re trying to save money Jackson thought. He went to his room to put his phone up and grabbed his watch from his desk on the way out.
1
. . .
I pressed the old, rusty, black doorbell when I arrived at Liam’s 5 minutes later. Minutes later Liam's mom opened the front door and told me to come inside and that Liam was up in his room with Luna. When I opened the door Liam and Luna were talking about me, but all I heard was “Why does my best friend have to move to vermont?” which must have been Liam. “Jackson moving broke Rebecca's heart. She even told me she was gonna try to convince her parents to move to Vermont. I’m kinda worried about her” said Luna.
I didn’t want them worrying about it so I walked in and in a silly voice I said “Liam, Luna guess what tomorrow we’re having 3 weeks of fall break!!” “Yeah but you’re moving in tomorrow how am I gonna survive without you?” Liam said sarcastically.
“How am I gonna live without you? HELP! I think I’m already dying.” I said even more sarcastic. “Stop messing around and do the stupid guitar song you guys have been making.” said Luna laughing
. . .
When I got home I started packing up everything in my room. When I finished packing up my room it was about 5:00p.m and there were so many boxes. I called Liam, when he picked up I said “My mom said that we were going out for pizza and that I could bring my friends. Wanna come? We're probably leaving in about 15 minutes,” “sure is it okay if I invite Luna or...” asked Liam “Yeah you can I'm inviting Becca.”
. . .
“Hey” Jackson said as Becca arrived. “Hi” squeaked Becca like a mouse.
Liam,Luna, Jackson, and Becca walked into Arcade, Pizza Palace and found a place to sit. They ate their dinner and desert then they split up to play games.
2
. . .
Becca and I went over to the basketball game, and of course I let her win. When we finished playing a couple rounds we added up our tickets and we had 5,500. We went over to the prize booth and I got her a life sized stuffed panda. Then we walked back to the entrance where we said we’d meet Luna and Liam.
a few moments ago
thats all I have so far of my book

Answer 2

yes

Answer 3

Me and my bsf are writing it

Answer 4

good job

Answer 5

coolio

Answer 6

i love it

Answer 7

Thank you!

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Imauser
Thank you!
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Your welcome

Answer 9

oo nice. Keep it up.

Answer 10

i am writing a book too and i think that, what you have wrote is amazing. there are no words in my eyes to could tell you how good it is.

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe2019
i am writing a book too and i think that, what you have wrote is amazing. there are no words in my eyes to could tell you how good it is.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
That's awesome you both should show me the final results. I'll be happy to see them.

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Imauser
My name is Jackson, Jackson mires to be exact. It’s almost prom but I have to move. My girlfriend Becca is so excited for prom though, but when I tell her I’m moving she’s gonna be crushed! “Okay, calm down Jackson, calm down.” said his best friend Liam. “How am I going to tell her that I’m moving from Virginia to Vermont 6 whole states away?!” asked Jackson. “I don’t know, why are you asking me a bunch of questions that I don’t know the answers to?!” Liam said, but before Liam or Jackson could speak the girls snuck up on them again
“Hey Jackson.” said Becca. “Hi Liam” said her bff Luna “Oh hey guys.” said Liam. “Ummm…. Becca, can I talk to you alone real quick?” Jackson asked nervously. “Sure?” Becca said, looking really confused in the hallway.
When Liam and Luna were finally out of view Jackson nervously started talking.“Becca I know we were gonna go to prom together, but I’m moving to Vermont I’m so sorry I don’t even want to move.”said Jackson slowly. ‘But...but you promised.”’ I know I did but I have to move”When she heard that she started to get bright red eyes like she was holding back millions of tears and turned around then faster than the speed of light she ran down the hall and turned to the left to go into the nearest girls bathroom.“I am a horrible person!” he mumbled.
. . .
When I got home the boring,old,rusty,white moving truck was already there, people were already putting our stuff inside. When I got inside it looked bare except for the bedrooms. When he saw his mom packing towels into a box he went over to her and said “Hey mom can I go over to Liams?” “Sure honey but make sure to be home by 4:30p.m to pack up your room okay.” “Okay mom.” He looked at his phone to see what time it was. 4:00.
He got all the way to the door when his mom came up behind him and said “Jackson remember you’re supposed to leave your phone here and take your watch” Ugh… I forgot we’re trying to save money Jackson thought. He went to his room to put his phone up and grabbed his watch from his desk on the way out.
1
. . .
I pressed the old, rusty, black doorbell when I arrived at Liam’s 5 minutes later. Minutes later Liam's mom opened the front door and told me to come inside and that Liam was up in his room with Luna. When I opened the door Liam and Luna were talking about me, but all I heard was “Why does my best friend have to move to vermont?” which must have been Liam. “Jackson moving broke Rebecca's heart. She even told me she was gonna try to convince her parents to move to Vermont. I’m kinda worried about her” said Luna.
I didn’t want them worrying about it so I walked in and in a silly voice I said “Liam, Luna guess what tomorrow we’re having 3 weeks of fall break!!” “Yeah but you’re moving in tomorrow how am I gonna survive without you?” Liam said sarcastically.
“How am I gonna live without you? HELP! I think I’m already dying.” I said even more sarcastic. “Stop messing around and do the stupid guitar song you guys have been making.” said Luna laughing
. . .
When I got home I started packing up everything in my room. When I finished packing up my room it was about 5:00p.m and there were so many boxes. I called Liam, when he picked up I said “My mom said that we were going out for pizza and that I could bring my friends. Wanna come? We're probably leaving in about 15 minutes,” “sure is it okay if I invite Luna or...” asked Liam “Yeah you can I'm inviting Becca.”
. . .
“Hey” Jackson said as Becca arrived. “Hi” squeaked Becca like a mouse.
Liam,Luna, Jackson, and Becca walked into Arcade, Pizza Palace and found a place to sit. They ate their dinner and desert then they split up to play games.
2
. . .
Becca and I went over to the basketball game, and of course I let her win. When we finished playing a couple rounds we added up our tickets and we had 5,500. We went over to the prize booth and I got her a life sized stuffed panda. Then we walked back to the entrance where we said we’d meet Luna and Liam.
a few moments ago
thats all I have so far of my book
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
damn bby that great

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe2019
i am writing a book too and i think that, what you have wrote is amazing. there are no words in my eyes to could tell you how good it is.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thank you soo much

Answer 14

When are young to publish?

Answer 15

I like it so far

Answer 16

Ty

Answer 17

Uhhh theres like 12 chapters I havent finished even one of them

Answer 18

loll

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Imauser
Uhhh theres like 12 chapters I havent finished even one of them
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
damn bby :O i love it

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Imauser
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe2019
i am writing a book too and i think that, what you have wrote is amazing. there are no words in my eyes to could tell you how good it is.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thank you soo much
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
you dont have to thank me for telling the truth

Answer 21

lol still

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @KjSaif
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe2019
i am writing a book too and i think that, what you have wrote is amazing. there are no words in my eyes to could tell you how good it is.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
That's awesome you both should show me the final results. I'll be happy to see them.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
thank you, but i have only finished 1 chapter

Answer 23

WOW thats all i got to say :)

Answer 24

lolll

Answer 25

its amazing 👏👏👏🖐️

Answer 26

cool

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @WendyMorales2007
its amazing 👏👏👏🖐️
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Thank you!

Answer 28

ofc

Answer 29

that's a really good book. you're really talented.

Answer 30

ty