Question

Ep2: omg
if u want to see ep 1 just dm me
not believe what she had just seen with her own two eyes. she saw her mother she quickly ran to her mom screaming MOMMYYYY MOMMYYYYY her my looked up surprised what are u doing here and how did u get here. well, sissy took me to da park and a wint in da woods to go see what dat tiny door was and thin I found u in there said jazz. omi wowo good but u no I didn't die well the people had to fake like I was dead so u wouldn't be sad but apparently u was sad lol but u need to get out of here it is not safe there is about to be a war and itssss bad soo plzzz leave. well ok, I am going to come back ok okay. hiii sis what I saw mom no u didn't that was just your imagination plzz stop u u don't believe me NOOOO okay let's go home wait doesn't that look like mom over there.......🙂

Answer 1

omg i love it

Answer 2

thank u not dat much peopple are on it

Answer 3

if u want to see ep 1 just dm me

Answer 4

oou that's a good one

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @babygurlcrip
oou that's a good one
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thank u

Answer 6

not bad
keep it up :)

Answer 7

thank uu

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @24kgold
thank uu
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np

Answer 9

Great Story

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
Great Story
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thank u

Answer 11

ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER

Answer 12

Ready for next one keep it up lol

Answer 13

good job. but I think it would be better to put quotation marks when the characters speak bc it was kinda confusing but overall, its great. Keep it up!

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
Hm, if* this is a story, i'd refrain from keeping "lol" out of it as much as possible. Also, as carmelle said, add quotations around the dialogue between your characters. Another thing, the spelling and grammar--they could be improved. It's a nice story though, so good job (:
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Answer 15

Da pfp got me dead

Answer 16

Who?

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @24kgold
Who?
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U

Answer 18

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tayjah
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @24kgold
Who?
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U
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
OK

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @24kgold
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tayjah
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @24kgold
Who?
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U
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OK
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U dnt get it

Answer 20

Girl u a catfish

Answer 21

Naaa

Answer 22

I seen dat picture on google

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tayjah
I seen dat picture on google
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I know I got it of of Google😂

Answer 24

off*

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @24kgold
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tayjah
I seen dat picture on google
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I know I got it of of Google😂
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DEN DAT MAKES U A CATFISH

Answer 26

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tayjah
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @24kgold
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tayjah
I seen dat picture on google
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I know I got it of of Google😂
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
DEN DAT MAKES U A CATFISH
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Whatever

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @24kgold
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tayjah
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @24kgold
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tayjah
I seen dat picture on google
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I know I got it of of Google😂
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
DEN DAT MAKES U A CATFISH
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Whatever
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ok catfish

Answer 28

can someone please help me

Answer 29

wit wat?

Answer 30

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hhanan
can someone please help me
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of what

Answer 31

my post

Answer 32

k

Answer 33

I love It !!!

Answer 34

Noice

Answer 35

thx

Answer 36

lmao

Answer 37

Great story, like the others said you could improve spelling and grammar, plus adding quotations around dialogu. But other than that you did amazing, keep up the good work and good luck on your next.episode ! 😁

Answer 38

ok thank u ig

Answer 39

It is amazing though

Answer 40

thxx

Answer 41

Np