Question

I need more topic on the poems that I should make, Any ideas? (One of my poems will be below, Feedback is welcome)

"Speaking."
I’m just speaking now.
Not screaming, not pleading.
Speaking.
I want you to hear me when I say “Listen”
I want you to pay attention to my words.
I’m speaking.
I want you to know what you have caused.
Your attention span lacks when I am speaking.
You don’t see the pain you have caused me, because you don’t listen when I am….
Speaking.

Answer 1

Cool poem

Answer 2

that's a good one-

Answer 3

wonderfull

Answer 4

This is actually nice. I'm not sure if everyone would be able to feel the emotions this poem gives off, but once you do, it's nice. You're actually a good writer. Do you have any other poems you've written?

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
This is actually nice. I'm not sure if everyone would be able to feel the emotions this poem gives off, but once you do, it's nice. You're actually a good writer. Do you have any other poems you've written?
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I'm working on more now, but I'm glad to see people enjoy my work, I'm trying to get more ideas of where to come from with my work so everyone can feel and understand my work

Answer 6

Ooo, nice, maybe when they're done, I could read them. We can talk more in dms ab it if you wish.
Yes, your work is great (:

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
Ooo, nice, maybe when they're done, I could read them. We can talk more in dms ab it if you wish.
Yes, your work is great (:
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Thank you, hun! And ofc I would love to talk more about it!

Answer 8

that's a good poem

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MayBaby
that's a good poem
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Thanks!

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BabydollBlake
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MayBaby
that's a good poem
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Thanks!
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you're welcome :')