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okie...my 2nd song...open to criticism and suggestions... i hope u like it!!! and just like my other song, u can post it on social media, youtube or u can sing it, wutever u want to do wit it... as long as u gimme credit for the lyrics!

I just wanna hold you close
Love you the most
Im reaching out
Like the sea to the coast

I like to lay on my bed
And dream of me and you
But in reality, it's all in my head
I mean, what can i do?

yeah

Im shattered
Im torn into pieces
Fake it till you make it
My self-esteem decreases
I remember the times
You would make me smile
Now all i can think of
Is if it was worth the while

I don't deserve you
You are so perfect
Take a look at me
Im a ship that's wrecked

Im slowly putting boards back together
They still tear me down
Its like bad weather
At least i'm not on the ground

I'm floating in a sea
My sea of heart-broke tears
I cry till i bleed
No one sees though, because no ones here

Yeah

Im shattered
Torn into pieces
Fake it till you make it
My self-esteem decreases
I remember all the times
You would make me smile
Now all i can think of
Is if it was worth your while

You slowly walk away
I just wish you would turn around
I know im lost but
I want to be found

I'm slowly sinking
It's hard to live now
Don't just stand there
Pull me up so i dont drown

Answer 1

good job
it so cool <3

Answer 2

Cool o:

Answer 3

tank uuuu!!!

Answer 4

U must really like water

Answer 5

lol

Answer 6

Wonderful!

Answer 7

tank u tank u

Answer 8

Np lol

Answer 9

nice mtae

Answer 10

mate*

Answer 11

etam*

Answer 12

*gives round of applause*

Answer 13

tank uuuu tank uuuu

Answer 14

it's really nice!

Answer 15

thnxxxx