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Astrid1:

It's always you Written By Meh (not letting meh put it in writing xD) It's brought me hurt when you said my name Yeah It brought me pain And all those days I looked for you You were gone Gone in the blue All those stories once said Of both of us happy in bed THEY WERE LIES!! You hurt me the most when you said my name Yea I FELT THE GODAMN pAIN And you put it on me acting like it was okay Now you call me a baby Because I was afraid... I'm Not like you I'm not built to hurt But when I do... It's always you... Always you The one I loved Always you The one who shoved YOU PUSHED ME OFF A CLIFF pretending it was for a gif Boii stop lying... I know you want me dead, Much less in YOUR bed. It's always you...

4evablood:

Me like it nt gone lie

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @4evablood Me like it nt gone lie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Yeah..

4evablood:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @4evablood Me like it nt gone lie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Yeah.. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) whts wrng

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @4evablood \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @4evablood Me like it nt gone lie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Yeah.. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) whts wrng \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Nothing's wrong, : )

4evablood:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @4evablood \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @4evablood Me like it nt gone lie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Yeah.. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) whts wrng \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Nothing's wrong, : ) \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ok juss checkin

LandonGoma:

i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LandonGoma i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Thanks, Im morally gonna change up the part where it says Gifs (stoopid) and then im gonna put it in my recent poetry book.

Veronicak31:

Love it 💗💗

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Veronicak31 Love it 💗💗 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Thanks!

Astrid1:

@xxcoffee

xxcoffee:

Its good.lol keep up the good work

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxcoffee Its good.lol keep up the good work \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) heh Thanks ig.

LILYLUV:

You know this is actually pretty good. Has a lot of rhythm. :)

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LILYLUV You know this is actually pretty good. Has a lot of rhythm. :) \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Yeah..

Xxbabyjas04xx:

Pretty good

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Xxbabyjas04xx Pretty good \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Thx

MxxnLight:

Nice nice.

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight Nice nice. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) thx

MxxnLight:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight Nice nice. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) thx \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) np!

Joe2019:

Gooodddddd job!!!

YSNJayy:

😭😭😭

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @YSNJayy 😭😭😭 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Uhhhh...

itsmehjay:

lol this is noice

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itsmehjay lol this is noice \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) thx -.0

itsmehjay:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itsmehjay lol this is noice \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) thx -.0 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) np :>

sxdsouls:

"YOU PUSHED ME OFF A CLIFF" LMAOOAOAOAOAO

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls "YOU PUSHED ME OFF A CLIFF" LMAOOAOAOAOAO \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) lol

boredfr:

You wrote this?

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr You wrote this? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yepp

boredfr:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr You wrote this? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yepp \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) hmmm....Can I sing it?


Post it and tag you?

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr You wrote this? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yepp \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) hmmm....Can I sing it? Post it and tag you? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Sure!

boredfr:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr You wrote this? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yepp \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) hmmm....Can I sing it? Post it and tag you? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Sure! \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) alr bet

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr You wrote this? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yepp \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) hmmm....Can I sing it? Post it and tag you? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Sure! \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) alr bet \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Bett!

BestBoiKirby:

very, reee? a lot going on. also wheres the chorus? 7/10

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby very, reee? a lot going on. also wheres the chorus? 7/10 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) 0.0 It;s not a song, It's a poem. And Meh friend wanted to sing it. -.-

boredfr:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby very, reee? a lot going on. also wheres the chorus? 7/10 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Yeah tbh there is no chorus but um it sounds like a song not a poem

BestBoiKirby:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby very, reee? a lot going on. also wheres the chorus? 7/10 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) 0.0 It;s not a song, It's a poem. And Meh friend wanted to sing it. -.- \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ohhhhh, that makes sense. in that case. still a lot going on, try to hide the meaning, that makes the best poem, when the reader has to figure out whats going on. 8/10 revised rating

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby very, reee? a lot going on. also wheres the chorus? 7/10 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) 0.0 It;s not a song, It's a poem. And Meh friend wanted to sing it. -.- \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ohhhhh, that makes sense. in that case. still a lot going on, try to hide the meaning, that makes the best poem, when the reader has to figure out whats going on. 8/10 revised rating \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ~O- Okie~

xxDeppressionxx:

It is really long

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxDeppressionxx It is really long \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Yea

jacksonsl:

umhm long

jacksonsl:

like long

Astrid1:

Ik it's long smh

jacksonsl:

mk

P1n3appl31:

its good! i couldnt even do songwriting if i tried!

ImBadKidTae:

nice keep it upp

Astrid1:

Thanks yall!

BestBoiKirby:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 Ik it's long smh \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) its actually the perfect length for a song/poem. (some people dont like reading, dont listen e.e)

boredfr:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 Ik it's long smh \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) its actually the perfect length for a song/poem. (some people dont like reading, dont listen e.e) \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ^

P1n3appl31:

kirby is right, some people just don't like to read and just say its too long.

Astrid1:

Yeppp

BestBoiKirby:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @P1n3appl31 kirby is right, some people just don't like to read and just say its too long. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) broooooo i made some songs a while ago, and this jerk came in on every single one without even reading it and says it looks like a book e.e it got annoying real quick

BestBoiKirby:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @P1n3appl31 kirby is right, some people just don't like to read and just say its too long. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) broooooo i made some songs a while ago, and this jerk came in on every single one without even reading it and says it looks like a book e.e it got annoying real quick \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) bc they dint like reading ig

Mafuyu:

it's nice keep it up, I like it

P1n3appl31:

OOF

P1n3appl31:

i bet the songs were good tho!

boredfr:

^^^

boredfr:

Kirby....do you sing?

BestBoiKirby:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr Kirby....do you sing? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) on occasion e.e im not good though

boredfr:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr Kirby....do you sing? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) on occasion e.e im not good though \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) hmmmmmmmmmmm..................I doubt that

P1n3appl31:

i can't sing either even tho everyone says im good...

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @P1n3appl31 i can't sing either even tho everyone says im good... \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) You are really good at singing.

Mafuyu:

;-; breh at least u guys can sing- my voice is soo deep, I can't even sing-

P1n3appl31:

am not.

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Mafuyu ;-; breh at least u guys can sing- my voice is soo deep, I can't even sing- \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) I'm sure you can sing.

Mafuyu:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Mafuyu ;-; breh at least u guys can sing- my voice is soo deep, I can't even sing- \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) I'm sure you can sing. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) T^T I wish I could

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @P1n3appl31 am not. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Read da keyboard -.0 YOUU CANNNN SINNGGGGG

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Mafuyu \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Mafuyu ;-; breh at least u guys can sing- my voice is soo deep, I can't even sing- \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) I'm sure you can sing. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) T^T I wish I could \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) YOU CAN SINGGGGGG

P1n3appl31:

i can't. i sound like a dieing cat.

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @P1n3appl31 i can't. i sound like a dieing cat. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) You don't sound like a dying cat

P1n3appl31:

yes i do

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @P1n3appl31 yes i do \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) NO YOU DON'T

P1n3appl31:

yas i do

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @P1n3appl31 yas i do \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) NO YOU DONT AND I AM NOT GOING TO ARGUE>

P1n3appl31:

i will if i have to,and i say imbad at singing.

P1n3appl31:

dere i said it

Astrid1:

You can think whatever you want, but you are very good at singing.

P1n3appl31:

NOOOOOOOO

P1n3appl31:

im not

P1n3appl31:

SERIOUSLY?!? no one responds.

Hoodmemes:

Nice song

Astrid1:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes Nice song \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Like i said, It is not a song, It's just a poem, but maybe i can consider it a song.

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