i made a song:

sometimes im a sinner; we should really have dinner; dont hold this ageist me today; you should really brake up with your bae; i really like you; i hope you like me too; no i dont mean any old like; i really want a bite

its not much but tell me what you think. and dont lie!

Question

i made a song:

sometimes im a sinner; we should really have dinner; dont hold this ageist me today; you should really brake up with your bae; i really like you; i hope you like me too; no i dont mean any old like; i really want a bite

its not much but tell me what you think. and dont lie!

Hoodmemes · Answer

Correct the spelling,overall the song is pretty good.

Joe2019 · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @Hoodmemes
Correct the spelling,overall the song is pretty good.
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oof, ok