Question

what do you think abt my book? plz dont lie!


Chapter 1
The beginning
This is a story about two kids that were meant to meet. They will do great things together. Now I know what you are thinking, you are thinking this is some sappy love story. Well… yes and no. it depends on what you call love. I say every story and every book is about love. I was asked once what is love. That is the question you should be asking yourself. What is love? What does love mean to you or maybe you want to know what I think love is. You will find out the answer throughout this story.
Now let’s go to the beginning. This story starts out with a fourteen-year-old girl named Mia. She is just a normal kid, if you can call any one normal. You could call her normal in her own way.
“hi dad!”
“hi honey, how was your day?” this is my dad Mike. He is pretty cool for a dad.
Today was my last day of school. I am so glad it is over, I could not wait for this day.
“it was fine. How was yours?”
“mine was same as always.” that my dads’ way of saying it could not get any better.
My dad is a Preacher. He never complains about his job. Growing up I never understood that so one day I asked him why. He said “because when you are working with God that is when you are having the most fun you will ever have. When I am up on that stage there are no worries. He is there with me I know this because every day I go up there and I know exactly what I am going to say.” My dad loves teaching me about God.
“I am going to go up to my room ok dad?”
“yeah that’s fine.”
Yesterday my favorite band/youtubers had an entering for a contest. They would not normally do this but today was there last day of college together and this is there way of celebrating. The entering for the contest was simple, all you had to do was like the video and commit “done” when you were done liking it. When you did that it entered your name into the contest. The winner of the contest would get to fly out to meet the band/youtubers. Everything would be payed for by this band. The band is my favorite band ever. They call themselves make mistakes. When you fly out to meet them you get to give them ideas on what they should do in their upcoming videos. Now I am going to see who won.

Answer 1

thats not all of it but it is the first page

Answer 2

nice

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AddyM
nice
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ty

Answer 4

It's very informative, Check some of your capitalizations when you are using dialogue. Overall, It's very nice.

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
It's very informative, Check some of your capitalizations when you are using dialogue. Overall, It's very nice.
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ok i will ty!

Answer 6

I LOVE IT!! NGL

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe2019
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
It's very informative, Check some of your capitalizations when you are using dialogue. Overall, It's very nice.
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ok i will ty!
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Your welcome!

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SelfishQueen
I LOVE IT!! NGL
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aww!! your so nice! you see this is why i like you. lol ty

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe2019
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SelfishQueen
I LOVE IT!! NGL
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aww!! your so nice! you see this is why i like you. lol ty
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Awe! ur so sweet! I like u too!

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SelfishQueen
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe2019
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SelfishQueen
I LOVE IT!! NGL
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aww!! your so nice! you see this is why i like you. lol ty
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Awe! ur so sweet! I like u too!
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lollll

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe2019
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SelfishQueen
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe2019
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SelfishQueen
I LOVE IT!! NGL
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aww!! your so nice! you see this is why i like you. lol ty
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Awe! ur so sweet! I like u too!
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lollll
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:)

Answer 12

I like it next page?

Answer 13

love it

Answer 14

needs some capitalization but still rlly good!!

Answer 15

Woah i love it

Answer 16

this was really interesting wish i could read more :) it's good.

Answer 17

I think its pretty good, I think you could put more deatails but good job