Question

I am writing a song called Wreck My World. I wanna know what y'all think tho it's not finished.

Wreck My World By Destiny R Greer:
I wish you could make up your mind,
Cuz you keep changing it a thousand times.
You say you want me but you keep runnin’ to her.
I don’t know what to think but I’m done getting hurt.
You keep messing with my head.
I wanna say no but always say yes.
Why ya gotta do this?
Chorus:
I’m done being the third wheel
You said you cared but I don’t believe it.
Cuz if you did, you’d still be with me.
But you’re spending a late night holding someone else.
Sayin’ you love her,
And sayin’ you don’t
I don't know what to do anymore.
I'm done with the games
You keep playin'
You stepping on my heart, like I'm nothing....
Feelin' like a fool for it all
But I'm done, letting you wreck my world
Oh I’m done letting you wreck my world.
Verse 2:
Do you honestly know all the hell you’re putting me through?
Or are you too blind to see what you’ve done to me?
I’ve cried too many tears to change my mind.
And I’m done with the same old lies.
You think I’m stupid, well I’ve been doing this my whole life.
And I’m done always being the girl you leave behind.
I wish you’d understand what you’re doin’ to me (Ooh)
Cuz, I don't know who I am anymore, cuz u took that away from me.
I’m done crying, I’m done pretending I’m okay.
When I’d rather shut down and block the world out.
Chorus:
I’m done being the third wheel
You said you cared but I don’t believe it.
Cuz if you did, you’d still be with me.
But you’re spending a late night holding someone else.
Sayin’ you love her,
And sayin’ you don’t.
I don't know what to do anymore.
I'm done with the games.
You keep playin'.
You stepping on my heart, like I'm nothing.
Feelin' like a fool for it all
But I'm done, letting you wreck my world
Oh I’m done letting you wreck my world.
(here it is)

Answer 1

I like that it's better than my song Chocolate Wafers you don't know what it is but it was very funny but I really like how you took this serious and made it a really brilliant song

Answer 2

thank you sm!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
thank you sm!!!!!!!!!!!
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
thank you sm!!!!!!!!!!!
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
thank you sm!!!!!!!!!!!
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No prb anytime

Answer 4

I'm glad you like it @Jennaofcbaby

Answer 5

I love thi. Its crazy bc i can relate to your song. its a 100/10 for me

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CashMoneyDay
I love thi. Its crazy bc i can relate to your song. its a 100/10 for me
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ty brb gtg do sum . TYSM

Answer 7

It means so much @CashMoneyDay

Answer 8

It’s really good, good job!

Answer 9

tysm Ashley!!!!!!!!!

Answer 10

yessiiirrrrrrr bsffffff

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Myadapimp
yessiiirrrrrrr bsffffff
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TYSMMMMMMMMMM bsf!!!!!!! :)

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Myadapimp
yessiiirrrrrrr bsffffff
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TYSMMMMMMMMMM bsf!!!!!!! :)
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npppp :)

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
thank you sm!!!!!!!!!!!
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Did you date phill lel

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Aricuzyas
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
thank you sm!!!!!!!!!!!
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Did you date phill lel
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He's my ex if you mean Philip Johnson

Answer 15

i like that song