Question

I made another poem for the ones asking. It's not as good as the other one. I wonder if people will understand this one better!

Alone
having no one else present.

I wanna run far away from you.
Mentally.
I wanna stay with you.
Physically.
I wish you would leave.
Mentally.
But I wish you would understand me.
Physically.
I wanna be alone.
Mentally.
I wanna be alone.
...Physically.

Answer 1

Mannn thats deep

Answer 2

Lol, yes its suppose to be :)

Answer 3

lol i see that

Answer 4

Wow, I really like this, its rrly understandable, i love it, you should write a few more :)

Answer 5

I love this sm~ you're very talented!! it was very emotional, very deep~ good job !

Answer 6

Thank you all! I didn't have courage in my work until I came to QC! You all are sweethearts!

Answer 7

No problem ! i look forward to seeing more~

Answer 8

Otayyyyy den sissy....all deep and on yo poetic justice shii...I SEE YOUUUUUUUU

Answer 9

wow. you are deep, i see you have a lot of pain. who/what hurt you this bad? you dont have to answer that. dm me if you ever need anything. the poem was 100% 💯💯💯

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe2019
wow. you are deep, i see you have a lot of pain. who/what hurt you this bad? you dont have to answer that. dm me if you ever need anything. the poem was 100% 💯💯💯
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thanks love, but its a lifetime of pain that's built up. But ill make sure to Dm you more

Answer 11

this is good! If it's okay, I'd like to colaborate with you! I think we'd come up with something amazing!

Answer 12

That is good, good job!

Answer 13

i like it