Question

Does this sound good?


This is for my Quick write in ELA

Before I wrote this quick write, I didn’t know who I would write about. So I listened to some music and went on my youtube channel and looked at some of the music that I listen to, I decided I was going to write about Juice Wrld. So, I would say Juice Wrld, His music is inspiring and truthful. I would read anything he writes. Juice Wrld, went through a lot when he was an artist, He sang about his troubles and what he dealt with. Instead of keeping his pain in, he told the world it through music. He was addicted to drugs, but that is okay. Everyone has to face reality and face the challenges that lie ahead of us. But Sadly, He lost the challenge and passed away.

Answer 1

Oops! I forgot to indent.

Answer 2

It sounds fine and your punctuation is good as well as spelling and grammar

Answer 3

7/10

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @loganisbored
7/10
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
What's wrong with it?

Answer 5

I feel like it would work @Astrid1

nice.

Answer 6

It sound good

Answer 7

that was good.