Question

I wrote this song awhile ago. I hope you like it:

They say giref has a gravity,
It pulls me under like a wave,
Part of me wants to hold on,
But I am just gonna fade,
Cause thats where I am meant to be,

(chorus)
Day by Day,
Month by Month,
Year by year,
Your stronger yet,
Tryna take away all the pain,
They caused from yesturday,
My heart is Craked,
My spirit died,
My soul exists one last time,
I may never shine,
But I will aways be ‘’fine’’

(Verse 2)
Ive always covered my tears with smiles, and hearts,
Walked around y’all happy as could be,
Little did you know,
I was fighting a battle inside,
Headed towards nothing, but hell,

(chorus)

(verse 3)
One day I will know,
Why y’all blamed me,
But it wasn’t true,
Oh it wasn’t true

Answer 1

Cool o:

Answer 2

nice song!!

Answer 3

@dontsaymyname @Hendrixapeals @Parisj

Answer 4

amazing

Answer 5

keep it up you could be famous

Answer 6

Nice song

Answer 7

@DANIELM

Answer 8

Good job!!

Answer 9

Thats good, good job!

Answer 10

Thanks Everyone!

Answer 11

Good job!

Answer 12

Hmm, I love it!

Answer 13

Cool one

Answer 14

Mackie, I love this, gr8 job, I love the feeling and emotion from your heart that you put in it !! Always know I'm here for you, always and 4ever

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
Mackie, I love this, gr8 job, I love the feeling and emotion from your heart that you put in it !! Always know I'm here for you, always and 4ever
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Thanks <3333

Answer 16

i love the song, your a good writer. O^O

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Zukasama
i love the song, your a good writer. O^O
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Thanks!!

Answer 18

Alaska I love it

Answer 19

vErY nOiCe

Answer 20

Awwww bbgggg the song is goodddd

Answer 21

Nice song

Answer 22

Ahhhhhhh! I'm not sure if this is good but I did it! lol ^-^ <3
@RandomSororityGirl

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MiraAngel
Ahhhhhhh! I'm not sure if this is good but I did it! lol ^-^ <3
@RandomSororityGirl
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Oop thatss goodddd

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MiraAngel
Ahhhhhhh! I'm not sure if this is good but I did it! lol ^-^ <3
@RandomSororityGirl
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Oop thatss goodddd
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OHMYGOD

Answer 25

ITS AMAZING