Question

- here's one of my poeme - opinions please ...


... the one that can't be said, how can I say?
What is the meaning of "LIFE", what is to be felt,
For what man has here, existence at present,
Who finds out about all this only, after living it to the end ...
What can be so warm, soothing to the heart?
What people sometimes think is just a fairy tale
Because it's like a dream, like a fabulous spell,
what we relive we feel how it is, how wonderful it is ...
... yes it's love, it's love - what else could it be?
the one who, in revenge, anger, is always a resolute blacksmith,
In order to love forever and also to be loved,
This is the MEANING OF LIFE, TO LOVE, TO LOVE, TO LOVE, TO LOVE ...
Jhony G.A. - 24/01/2016
BUDAPEST

Answer 1

@Laylalyssa

Answer 2

Oh it's so great and wonderful good job jhonyy <3

Answer 3

woah nice, my brain hurts from re-reading it

Answer 4

and yes it's grammatically correct

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
and yes it's grammatically correct
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really ? ty so much

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
and yes it's grammatically correct
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really ? ty so much
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yw! :)

Answer 7

Nice Poème

Answer 8

Good job, I like this poem!! :D

Answer 9

Best poem I ever heard frfr

Answer 10

Agreed

Answer 11

i have again so much - but in hungarian language - i need translate them ...

Answer 12

Amazing!! you have an incredible talent.
Great job on the grammar, no need for correction.
I encourage you to make more poems.
Really, you have done an incredible piece of work!!

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Amazing!! you have an incredible talent.
Great job on the grammar, no need for correction.
I encourage you to make more poems.
Really, you have done an incredible piece of work!!
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ty very very much - appreciate your words and encourage - ty so much

Answer 14

@Laylalyssa yours the same

Answer 15

yay

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Amazing!! you have an incredible talent.
Great job on the grammar, no need for correction.
I encourage you to make more poems.
Really, you have done an incredible piece of work!!
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ty very very much - appreciate your words and encourage - ty so much
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Np (: <3

Answer 17

@Laylalyssa look what made with my posted poem page -- !!

Answer 18

Wow, jhonny! This is actually very great. Seeing as English is not your first language, the grammar is great! I had to reread it quite a few times in order to get an in-depth understanding. However, this is amazing. You have an awesome talent. If you could translate the other ones you have, I'd LOVE to read them (: Great work <3

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
Wow, jhonny! This is actually very great. Seeing as English is not your first language, the grammar is great! I had to reread it quite a few times in order to get an in-depth understanding. However, this is amazing. You have an awesome talent. If you could translate the other ones you have, I'd LOVE to read them (: Great work <3
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ty so much

Answer 20

one other ...


... minutes of loneliness, I think of you immediately,
where are you going, what are you doing, bad or good?
who are you to me now, such an important person,
that I think of you so often ?
when will I get so all this back from you?
will the balance of our friendship finally be in equilibru ?
I've been looking forward to this for a long time, hoping too,
that the proverb says, who loves, trusts,
the day will come, I know for sure, I feel,
the sun's rays will shine high in the sky,
our friendship will be endless
eternal,
will helps us in this the omnipotence Eternal ...

Answer 21

Way to go jhonyy! Im very impressed. You can be a song writer

Answer 22

Lol good job

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SandMandGirl
Way to go jhonyy! Im very impressed. You can be a song writer
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ty so much - really ? so i have music compositions - music and text - too - i play on synthesizer and i sing

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SandMandGirl
Way to go jhonyy! Im very impressed. You can be a song writer
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ty so much - really ? so i have music compositions - music and text - too - i play on synthesizer and i sing
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oh that's great

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SandMandGirl
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SandMandGirl
Way to go jhonyy! Im very impressed. You can be a song writer
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ty so much - really ? so i have music compositions - music and text - too - i play on synthesizer and i sing
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oh that's great
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ty

Answer 26

Anytime!

Answer 27

poems*

Answer 28

Its really good I love it!

Answer 29

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @UNO11034
Its really good I love it!
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ty

Answer 30

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @UNO11034
Its really good I love it!
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ty
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np :)

Answer 31

so i have again more just i need research them and try translate in Englisch

Answer 32

Beautiful poems and beautiful people, truly a wholesome post.

Answer 33

Thank you for sharing :)

Answer 34

yw - ty for these encouragely words- i will try translate from what i have again and post them here

thank you so much

hnd-

Answer 35

@Shadow tell me pls really how i ve translated and arranged little in other places the words for rhymes - where was posibil ... - truly that can be understanding what i wan comunicate message to everybody who read this poem ?

Answer 36

the theme - the subject - the message - ?

Answer 37

Omg I love it! You should keep up the good work and some day you should publish this.... Your really good at writing these so I would make some more.... and I would be glad to read them :)

Answer 38

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @babygirlimarie
Omg I love it! You should keep up the good work and some day you should publish this.... Your really good at writing these so I would make some more.... and I would be glad to read them :)
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really ? omg - i dont wan believe it - ty so much

Answer 39

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @babygirlimarie
Omg I love it! You should keep up the good work and some day you should publish this.... Your really good at writing these so I would make some more.... and I would be glad to read them :)
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really ? omg - i dont wan believe it - ty so much
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Omg yeah this is amazing and i didnt know that english wasnt your first language but with that not being your language that was amazing.... and for real you should make more and publish them to like redit and maybe start writing them and send to get published.... this was amazing!

Answer 40

i will post share here more bc. i have a lote same like these or i have one my preferable what i ve wrote to my mother - this is a song - i will share the text here bc. the music idk again how maybe posibil

Answer 41

i m so sorry but English really not is my mother or first or second languages bc. hungarian is my mother language,roumanian is - was - my birth country official language - in Romania french is the second teached language and i ve learn again germain ,latin one year - from french ,roumanian latin result i know so good italian and spanish too

Answer 42

wow.... thats a lot of language i only know two but I want to learn another one... But its amazing that you can write this with such amazing grammar and you wrote it so well.... I was shocked at how good it was so I would for real make more and post them :)

Answer 43

ok i will try how i will have time ... ty your words - yw

Answer 44

omg your so welcome

Answer 45

one other one

Friendship

as long as man lives he is tormented by desires,
the purpose of life is many, many tiny desires
he wanders with hopes in his life's journey
he believes that many flowers will open in his ways,
looks to the future with great confidence,
his dreams are brightened by many stellar lights,
he knows that in reality loneliness is so bad
wherever fate takes you, a good friend comes in handy
it is so good in your life to have a good friend
who is always by your side through water and fire,
you are happy together and so all wishes
as a common goal are realized all obsessions ...

Answer 46

I love ittttt <3

Answer 47

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @babygirlimarie
I love ittttt <3
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ty- yw

Answer 48

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @babygirlimarie
I love ittttt <3
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ty- yw
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Your so welcome
Keep up the good work

Answer 49

ok ty

Answer 50

great keep it up

Answer 51

one other one

Hope


if you ever feel that someone has abandoned you
looking for your star in the midnight sky
if you are sad and your eyes are in tears
I'm always ready to
I'll hold your hand

if you ever feel like something hurts
loneliness breaks you in the dark nights,
if life torments you, your eyes are in tears
I'm always ready to hold your hand.
don't think about yesterday, don't think about the past,
look ahead always find a way out,
because the road of life is bumpy, but the wind of a happy future,
the encouragement of hope touches you and caresses your love ...

Answer 52

wow that is beautiful

Answer 53

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
one other one

Hope


if you ever feel that someone has abandoned you
looking for your star in the midnight sky
if you are sad and your eyes are in tears
I'm always ready to
I'll hold your hand

if you ever feel like something hurts
loneliness breaks you in the dark nights,
if life torments you, your eyes are in tears
I'm always ready to hold your hand.
don't think about yesterday, don't think about the past,
look ahead always find a way out,
because the road of life is bumpy, but the wind of a happy future,
the encouragement of hope touches you and caresses your love ...
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Wow, these really nice. Looking forward to seeing some more. :)

Answer 54

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
one other one

Hope


if you ever feel that someone has abandoned you
looking for your star in the midnight sky
if you are sad and your eyes are in tears
I'm always ready to
I'll hold your hand

if you ever feel like something hurts
loneliness breaks you in the dark nights,
if life torments you, your eyes are in tears
I'm always ready to hold your hand.
don't think about yesterday, don't think about the past,
look ahead always find a way out,
because the road of life is bumpy, but the wind of a happy future,
the encouragement of hope touches you and caresses your love ...
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truly beautiful. amazing job. I'm very impressed <3