Question

To all the lies I've heard before~ By Asrid

To all the stories I've heard before
Now I know the real you
and my heart has been broken before.
Don't think I won't slam the door

I knew you from the start
Every time you broke my heart
Now you expect me to come back
and stack
All the lies that have been spread about me
I'm good without the key

The key to the heart
cannot start
because I have been broken...
So...

To all the stories I've heard before
Now I know the real you
and my heart has been broken before.
Don't think I won't slam the door,

I hope you have a great life
Because of all the lies, I have heard before
Don't think I won't slam the door.

Answer 1

Astrid*

Answer 2

Oof this wasn't so good

Answer 3

Ehhh. 7/10 I didn't really understand the 2nd and 4th paragraph. But keep working on it.

Answer 4

Maybe replace a couple words,other than that its a good corny song

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
Maybe replace a couple words,other than that its a good corny song
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you say everythings corny

Answer 6

or cheesy

Answer 7

Not true, :l

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @imnotsmartlol
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
Maybe replace a couple words,other than that its a good corny song
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you say everythings corny
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Not true

Answer 9

yes it is

Answer 10

Okay whatever please don't get off topic.

Answer 11

I agree with yall, There are some things that need to be changed, and ofc I need to add more lyrics.

Answer 12

nice

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
I agree with yall, There are some things that need to be changed, and ofc I need to add more lyrics.
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I'm happy you accept your mistakes! If you fix them I think it'll be lovely-

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
I agree with yall, There are some things that need to be changed, and ofc I need to add more lyrics.
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I'm happy you accept your mistakes! If you fix them I think it'll be lovely-
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Yes mame. ~ <3

Answer 15

Yall didn't know but I was seriously abt to add
To all the stories I've heard before
I want to know if u snore. xD

Answer 16

Not gonna lie. The title reminds me of the movie, "To all the boys i've loved before".

Answer 17

i like the lryics

Answer 18

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
Not gonna lie. The title reminds me of the movie, "To all the boys i've loved before".
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Hmmmmm, I didn't think abt that.

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
I agree with yall, There are some things that need to be changed, and ofc I need to add more lyrics.
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I'd say in stead of having "the door" have "that door"


"The key to the heart
cannot start
because I have been broken...
So..."

"

Prolly put "The key to my heart" since its in a first person point of view which is looking like your heart was broke.

"I hope you have a great life
Because of all the lies, I have heard before
Don't think I won't slam the door."

to

"I hope you have a nice time
without me in your life
Because I'm done with all of your lies"

Idk just making suggestions

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
I agree with yall, There are some things that need to be changed, and ofc I need to add more lyrics.
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I'd say in stead of having "the door" have "that door"


"The key to the heart
cannot start
because I have been broken...
So..."

"

Prolly put "The key to my heart" since its in a first person point of view which is looking like your heart was broke.

"I hope you have a great life
Because of all the lies, I have heard before
Don't think I won't slam the door."

to

"I hope you have a nice time
without me in your life
Because I'm done with all of your lies"

Idk just making suggestions
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Nice nice! Agreed.

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
Not gonna lie. The title reminds me of the movie, "To all the boys i've loved before".
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Hmmmmm, I didn't think abt that.
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You should check the movie out!

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
Not gonna lie. The title reminds me of the movie, "To all the boys i've loved before".
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Hmmmmm, I didn't think abt that.
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You should check the movie out!
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Oh, I've seen it.

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
Not gonna lie. The title reminds me of the movie, "To all the boys i've loved before".
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Hmmmmm, I didn't think abt that.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
You should check the movie out!
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Oh, I've seen it.
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Ah, Okay. *^* well. just work on your mistakes, and i think it'll work out just fine! (:

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
Not gonna lie. The title reminds me of the movie, "To all the boys i've loved before".
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Hmmmmm, I didn't think abt that.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
You should check the movie out!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Oh, I've seen it.
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Ah, Okay. *^* well. just work on your mistakes, and i think it'll work out just fine! (:
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okie when i'm done i'll repost it.