Question

I am currently writing a rap song in Spanish.

Any FeedBack?

(Thank you!)

Lasos De Sangre - XioGonz

Dime la verdad, que es lo que tu sientes?

Me empiesas a decir pero te detienes derrepente.

No te juzgare, ven y hablemos frente a frente.

Dime tus pensamientos que no te puedo leer la mente.

Hacerca te a mi porque quisiera ser tu amiga.

No, no tengas miedo, yo no soy una asesina.

Armate de valor y ya no seas tan solitario.

Eres una persona fuerte y tu no debes llorar tanto.

Estoy aqui para ti, habla conmigo.
Confia en mi, no estes despavorido.

Caras vemos corazones no sabemos,

y aunque esos verdad tu no my debes tener miedo.

Solamente quiero que sientas felicidad.

Y mientras sientas lo opuesto no me voy a largar.

Aqui me quedare aunque me este derrumbando.

Yo no me movere hasta no verte celebrando.

--This is all I have for now--

Answer 1

Looks more like a song,but its good

Answer 2

I love it. KeEp gOiNg 😳🤍

Answer 3

its good!

Answer 4

Ty!!

Answer 5

*At least medal her... ;c*

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
*At least medal her... ;c*
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I did :)

Answer 7

I'd make a recording but my mic isn't working. It moves fast too

Answer 8

Oh.

Answer 9

si si bravo 😏👌

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
I love it. KeEp gOiNg 😳🤍
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And tytytyty <3

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MxxnLight
I love it. KeEp gOiNg 😳🤍
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And tytytyty <3
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Anytime mi roach. <3 <3

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @KjSaif
si si bravo 😏👌
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Lmao XD

Answer 13

its good tbh

Answer 14

Thank you!

Answer 15

it is good i like it ✌😊

Answer 16

Thnxxxxxxxx

Answer 17

Don't understand but dope

Answer 18

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Adovbush
Don't understand but dope
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Ikr the words look cool B)

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Adovbush
Don't understand but dope
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Ikr the words look cool B)
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Answer 20

i understood most of it and it good!

Answer 21

Thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Answer 22

Get me a translator

Answer 23

theres always google layla!

Answer 24

Me: Using Google Translate to find the words
but greaaattt jobbbb Xio, I really like the feeling and thoughtfulness u put into it

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
Get me a translator
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Uh
https://www.bing.com/search?q=google+translate&cvid=381ae1b4fb454be0968beb6c5a7eb826&pglt=547&FORM=ANNTA1&PC=U531

XD

Answer 26

Thx 🥺😩

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
Me: Using Google Translate to find the words
but greaaattt jobbbb Xio, I really like the feeling and thoughtfulness u put into it
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Thank you so much JJ !!! <3

Answer 28

Its pretty good!

Answer 29

Ty!

Answer 30

hey, DM me

Answer 31

I wanna collab

Answer 32

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lilaspie7
hey, DM me
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Bruh

Answer 33

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lilaspie7
hey, DM me
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no

Answer 34

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
Me: Using Google Translate to find the words
but greaaattt jobbbb Xio, I really like the feeling and thoughtfulness u put into it
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Thank you so much JJ !!! <3
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Ofc <3

Answer 35

It's good i like it

Answer 36

Thanks nateee!

Answer 37

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Ty!
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yw

Answer 38

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
Get me a translator
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Uh
https://www.bing.com/search?q=google+translate&cvid=381ae1b4fb454be0968beb6c5a7eb826&pglt=547&FORM=ANNTA1&PC=U531

XD
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LMAO

Answer 39

XD

Answer 40

Ïtś gööd😁🤩
Good job xïömärä😍
And thx for the translator😅😫

Answer 41

Zeo

Answer 42

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
Ïtś gööd😁🤩
Good job xïömärä😍
And thx for the translator😅😫
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Graciassssssssssssssss Laylaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa<3
Te lo agradesco mucho ;P

Answer 43

Uhhh brb ima translate again😅😫

Answer 44

LMAO

Answer 45

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
Ïtś gööd😁🤩
Good job xïömärä😍
And thx for the translator😅😫
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Graciassssssssssssssss Laylaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa<3
Te lo agradesco mucho ;P
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Ur welcome
Xioooooooo❤️
Keep it up 👍🥺😁

Answer 46

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
Ïtś gööd😁🤩
Good job xïömärä😍
And thx for the translator😅😫
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Graciassssssssssssssss Laylaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa<3
Te lo agradesco mucho ;P
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Ur welcome
Xioooooooo❤️
Keep it up 👍🥺😁
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I will for sure! Thanks for the good feedback too!

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Answer 47

Niceeeeee

Answer 48

Woe 🥰🥰😍😍

Answer 49

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
Niceeeeee
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Tytytytytyty!!!

Answer 50

Oop 16 medals B0

Answer 51

Muy bien. :)

Answer 52

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sophia333
Muy bien. :)
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Gratias tibiiiiiiiiiii

Answer 53

tienes un ritmo? o ya no?

Answer 54

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
tienes un ritmo? o ya no?
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Yep I have the rythm

Answer 55

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
tienes un ritmo? o ya no?
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Yep I have the rythm
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rythm~~beat

Answer 56

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
tienes un ritmo? o ya no?
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Yep I have the rythm
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rythm~~beat
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Yes Ik lol

Answer 57

dayum this good

Answer 58

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hunterrr
dayum this good
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Ty!

Answer 59

u welcome

Answer 60

sounds great

Answer 61

Tremendous!

Answer 62

Thanks!

Answer 63

Thanks!

Answer 64

Ofcc!

Answer 65

Awesome work!

Answer 66

que bien el cancion de rap. muy bien 👌🏻

Answer 67

Lyrics:
Tell me the truth that you feel

You start to tell me but you stop suddenly.

I won't judge you, come and let's talk face to face.

Tell me your thoughts that I can't read your mind.

Come closer to me because I want to be your friend.

No, don't be afraid, I'm not a murderer.

Arm yourself with courage and you no longer feel so alone.

You are a strong person and you shouldn't cry so much.

I'm here for you, talk to me.
Trust me, don't panic.

Faces we see hearts we don't know

And while that is true, you should not be afraid.

I just want you to feel happiness.

And as long as I feel otherwise, I will not leave.

Here I'll stay even if I'm breaking down.

I won't move until I see you celebrating.

Answer 68

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Oop 16 medals B0
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22 now
woe