Question

- and look please this is my most liked poem ,what i' ve wrote when i was 14 years old ...to my loved mother ...please dont cry - !

your son's mother speaks, listen now,
it tells you everything, why his heart hurts,
listen to him now and forgive him please
oh mama mama
mother

I was the light of your two eyes, your two hands protected me from anything,
if I was bad you wouldn't beat me
oh mama mama mama

mom thank you for life
all the good things you did for me
Please forgive me many bad deeds
oh mama mama mama.
which hides life bad or good
unfortunately it is not known in advance
you trusted me and you felt so good
oh mama mama mama

mom thank you for life
all the good things you did for me
Please forgive me many bad deeds
oh mama mama
mother

thank you mom for all the best
many tears that flowed for me,
I know if I'm with you you're fine
here I am my mother forever!

Answer 1

cool

Answer 2

so good

Answer 3

Spot on!! I love it

Answer 4

10/10

Answer 5

Wholesome

Answer 6

I love it!

Answer 7

10/10 indeed

Answer 8

same

Answer 9

Very nice!

Answer 10

noice it flows together really well ✨

Answer 11

NIce!!!!!!!!!!
Heart felt
Straight forward
I love it !

Answer 12

It's very nice.. : )

Answer 13

same

Answer 14

kinda wishing I had a mother like this ;/

Answer 15

i like how you kept track of your poem, thats awesome

Answer 16

Very good!! I like it :D

Answer 17

leave comment so i can give medal

Answer 18

frl XD

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @loganisbored
leave comment so i can give medal
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
@jhonyy9

Answer 20

Wow, Jhonny. This one is by far my favorite poem of yours. Very heartfelt. Lots of emotions. I absolutely love it. It's amazing. Thank you so much for sharing! Your writing is amazing <3

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
Wow, Jhonny. This one is by far my favorite poem of yours. Very heartfelt. Lots of emotions. I absolutely love it. It's amazing. Thank you so much for sharing! Your writing is amazing <3
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ty so much

Answer 22

james charles loves you

Answer 23

No i'm not crying.. you are! *sniff* ;-;

Answer 24

Aww good job 🥺

Answer 25

Awww its really good

Answer 26

Excellent !!!

Thats very sweet. :)

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @justus
Excellent !!!

Thats very sweet. :)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ty

Answer 28

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @justus
Excellent !!!

Thats very sweet. :)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ty
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
NP :)

Answer 29

and this poem has music too bc. this is a song

Answer 30

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
and this poem has music too bc. this is a song
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
hot

Answer 31

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
and this poem has music too bc. this is a song
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Cool 😎

Answer 32

this is the second one what i love so much

Anikó - (is a girl name in hungarian language ) (who was my greatest love )



in winter when the snow is drizzling softly
I always remember the beautiful girl Anikó,
spring has come and with it a beautiful weather
oh how beautiful, miraculous she was.

the late night of summer shining in the moonlight,
thinking about it, my lips burn with the fire of sweet kisses,
When her blond hair was lightly torn by the wind,
His memory lives on in my heart forever.
and the weather slowly got warmer,
we loved each other so that my heart was not pressed against the stone,
but summer flew over us quickly, slowly
gray leaves appeared trembling on the tree,
And then what I feared a long time ago happened,
that she definitely left who I really loved
Anikó, Anikó, tell me at last
why was fate so cruel to us?
In winter, when the snow is quiet in silence,
I always remember my true love Anikó,
Anikó! Anikó! Anikó!
your memory will never be covered by snow,
your memory lives in my heart forever
Anikó I love you forever!

Answer 33

@mxddi3 here is

Answer 34

@XioGonz

Answer 35

Jhonny !!!! This is so sweet. I like this one as well. Very creative and it's just puts lots of love in the air. Great job my friend <3

Answer 36

thank you very much

Answer 37

Good job!! this is very good as well

Answer 38

this one is very good too love it

Answer 39

yes this is a poem about love - great love ...

Answer 40

Yes

Answer 41

thats a really nice poemm

Answer 42

You portray plenty of heart dealt emotion through your poems and that is something of which I enjoy very much. Congratulations jhony.

Answer 43

the only duet music of my compositions :

1. (boy)

a girl lives somewhere,
my heart longs for her
anything can happen and anyone can come, my heart is just waiting for her.

2.(girl)

a guy lives somewhere
his companion is only loneliness,
if he finds me, I would stay with him and happiness with me.

refr. (boy , girl , together)

come my dear
beautify my life,
light up my ray of life,
come my dear
beautify my life
May happiness come with you.

Answer 44

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
You portray plenty of heart dealt emotion through your poems and that is something of which I enjoy very much. Congratulations jhony.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ty very much - apreciate your words - opinion - ty

Answer 45

- ordered by the @justus

There is a girl on the forum
I haven't known her in a long time
I don’t know much about her
but to be honest I like her

Very energetic, full of life,
knows from the heart to smile, with love right
smile sitting on her face,even if sadly,
but no one can see never sadly, grimly,

Her favorite color is green,she loves cars, motorcycles
patiently create and draw better than better
more beautiful than beautiful
she really have a lot of ideas about them,almost endless.

A very humble person
who can and loves to love,
to give love happily,
and to make others truly happy.
Jhony A.G. - Budapest
2021.01.31. Hungary

Answer 46

𝕋𝕙𝕒𝕟𝕜 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕤𝕠 𝕞𝕦𝕔𝕙! 𝕀 𝕝𝕠𝕧𝕖 𝕚𝕥. ♡ :)

Answer 47

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @justus
𝕋𝕙𝕒𝕟𝕜 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕤𝕠 𝕞𝕦𝕔𝕙! 𝕀 𝕝𝕠𝕧𝕖 𝕚𝕥. ♡ :)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yw - i m glad that you love it - ty

Answer 48

this is, it brings a tear to my eye. im sorry i didnt listen to your warning ;-;

Answer 49

ohhh wow i love it, made me cry a bit

Answer 50

damn

Answer 51

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) jhonyy9
- ordered by the @justus

There is a girl on the forum
I haven't known her in a long time
I don’t know much about her
but to be honest I like her

Very energetic, full of life,
knows from the heart to smile, with love right
smile sitting on her face,even if sadly,
but no one can see never sadly, grimly,

Her favorite color is green,she loves cars, motorcycles
patiently create and draw better than better
more beautiful than beautiful
she really have a lot of ideas about them,almost endless.

A very humble person
who can and loves to love,
to give love happily,
and to make others truly happy.
Jhony A.G. - Budapest
2021.01.31. Hungary
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
i-
this one is good as well ! Very great job, Jhonyy <3

Answer 52

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bri05
ohhh wow i love it, made me cry a bit
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ok but what poem from these above wrote ? bc. there are some 4 i think

Answer 53

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bri05
ohhh wow i love it, made me cry a bit
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ok but what poem from these above wrote ? bc. there are some 4 i think
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
the first one u wrote

Answer 54

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bri05
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bri05
ohhh wow i love it, made me cry a bit
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ok but what poem from these above wrote ? bc. there are some 4 i think
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
the first one u wrote
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeah - this is what i ve wrote to my mother - and this is my must loved poem forever

Answer 55

Woww! I like itt so muchhh

Answer 56

Wow, great job I love it so much

Answer 57

That was amazing good job

Answer 58

wow thats an awsome poem

Answer 59

👍🏿 good job bro

Answer 60

i like the poem its great

Answer 61

cool

Answer 62

your poem is great keep up the good work

Answer 63

interesting 🤨😯

Answer 64

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
the only duet music of my compositions :
@MiraAngel this is about what i ve said you
1. (boy)

a girl lives somewhere,
my heart longs for her
anything can happen and anyone can come, my heart is just waiting for her.

2.(girl)

a guy lives somewhere
his companion is only loneliness,
if he finds me, I would stay with him and happiness with me.

refr. (boy , girl , together)

come my dear
beautify my life,
light up my ray of life,
come my dear
beautify my life
May happiness come with you.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)

Answer 65

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
the only duet music of my compositions :
@MiraAngel this is about what i ve said you
1. (boy)

a girl lives somewhere,
my heart longs for her
anything can happen and anyone can come, my heart is just waiting for her.

2.(girl)

a guy lives somewhere
his companion is only loneliness,
if he finds me, I would stay with him and happiness with me.

refr. (boy , girl , together)

come my dear
beautify my life,
light up my ray of life,
come my dear
beautify my life
May happiness come with you.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Yes. So a girl just sings the two parts?

Answer 66

Also, your first poem really connects to me. Very well written and lots of thoughts and emotion. It really touches a tender spot in my heart and causes my mind to wander. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece.

Answer 67

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MiraAngel
Also, your first poem really connects to me. Very well written and lots of thoughts and emotion. It really touches a tender spot in my heart and causes my mind to wander. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
so what is my the best must loved what i ve wrote to my mother when i was 14 yo.

Answer 68

and this is a song too

Answer 69

yeah

Answer 70

Wow.... that was amazing almost made me cry a little, I would keep writing them.

Answer 71

You have a gift. Your poem speaks to many people and I think you should write more. If you do let me know! I would like to read them.

Answer 72

Nice Poem!, you could be a pro writer.

Answer 73

i like this poem its really good

Answer 74

yea i like it 2

Answer 75

AMAZINGZYOUGO

Answer 76

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itsmehjay
No i'm not crying.. you are! *sniff* ;-;
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Agreed :')

Answer 77

oof

Answer 78

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MiraAngel
Also, your first poem really connects to me. Very well written and lots of thoughts and emotion. It really touches a tender spot in my heart and causes my mind to wander. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
no - the first part sing a boy and the refr. (bis) next this the second part sing a girl and the refr. and in the last part sing together 2 time the refr. - in this way i composed it

Answer 79

This is amazing *^* You're incredible

Answer 80

100/100 nice job and my friend cried when she read too

Answer 81

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @foolghost14
100/100 nice job and my friend cried when she read too
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ty so much and i m happy that you like it

Answer 82

keep what you have been doing and have a good day

Answer 83

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Downpour17
This is amazing *^* You're incredible
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ty - but i m a simple man -- ,,incredible" ??? ty - i have a lot of poems again from what more are songs too - i will try translate them and i will share here to you

Answer 84

thats rly good.

Answer 85

WOW/AMAZING

Answer 86

AMAZING

Answer 87

Amazing

Answer 88

i love it

Answer 89

Its a beautiful poem. ^^

Answer 90

Nice 100/100

Answer 91

wth, this poem is amazing, it's hard wording it but it's amazing, best thing about this poem i the way you have this worded, you did a m a z i n g

Answer 92

.

Answer 93

.