Question

i know i posted these a while ago but for people who did not see it this is my rap song and it is called dear mom this is from my personal life tell me what you think

Answer 1

Dear mom, I hope your ok, knowing that
Your kids will have to go through the pain
I will never love you the same ever since
That day you left me with my grandma you left
Me here to stay, i wished for you to come back
But you never did you never called to say happy
Birthday or give me a gift, what happens if my
Grandma did not take us in
Where would we be now i feel like a clown i waited for
You but you never came around it's been so long
I forgot how you sound you didn’t have to be
Perfect but you should of stuck around now I’m lost
And i feel like i can never be found I hate to hear your name
It makes me want to scream and shout i’m tryin to figure things
Out why did you leave me i’m just a kid i really did not deserve this
Sometimes i think of when i have kids and they ask me where are you
What do i say then but i'm not the one to judge i don’t blame you, your mom left
You so i guess it’s in our blood sometimes i think of you
And i search my mind, for another memories to keep your inside but I just
Want you to no im doing just fine

Answer 2

8/10

Answer 3

good job

Answer 4

thx guys you think i should become a rapper

Answer 5

Its really good

Answer 6

if you want and if you emjoy it just go for it

Answer 7

alright thats what im going to do

Answer 8

ok gl

Answer 9

thx this means a lot to me

Answer 10

ok

Answer 11

Nice.

Answer 12

yeah you go girl! :) gl

Answer 13

um im a guy lmaooo

Answer 14

im 14

Answer 15

oop

Answer 16

i rap too but i cant post it or ima get banned

Answer 17

nicee😏

Answer 18

hahahahah yeah some of my rap songs are graphic

Answer 19

Ooh, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Keep it up!

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Ooh, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Keep it up!
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Ooh, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Keep it up!
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😏

Answer 22

sorry thought you were a grl :'D

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Ooh, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Keep it up!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
sugar daddy ;)

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Ooh, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Keep it up!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Ooh, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Keep it up!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏
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peeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😏

Answer 26

jkjk

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @loganisbored
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Ooh, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Keep it up!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
sugar daddy ;)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
hola c;😏

Answer 28

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Ooh, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Keep it up!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏
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peeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
lmf.aooooooooo😏

Answer 29

well thx im going to close this post now

Answer 30

but good luck anyways

Answer 31

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @loganisbored
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Ooh, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Keep it up!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
sugar daddy ;)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
hola c;😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
hehe ;;)

Answer 32

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @loganisbored
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @loganisbored
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Ooh, niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Keep it up!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
sugar daddy ;)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
hola c;😏
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
hehe ;;)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
c;😏😏😏

Answer 33

sugar papi

Answer 34

yay c:😏