Question

i made a song i wanted to know Ur guys opinion

Answer 1

Okay

Answer 2

Cookie parents they run our lives
they ruin our dreams and our strives
if my grandfathers never had 9 wives
we couldve had nine lives
depression is real
i said to mom "lets make a deal"
i talk nothing seems to appeal
they really need to see
what they do to me
what they do to we
they dont seem to see
i dont really care anymore
it really heats me to the core
my tears just pour and pour
i wish for things more hardcore

Answer 3

autocorrect sucks

Answer 4

Its good

Answer 5

Lovely *^*

Answer 6

keep it up : )

Answer 7

thx