Question

I write a poem and its called Mr.Fix it
There's this dark fear,inside me
It doesn't want to be,inside anymore
It wants to be fought against
There's this emptiness, inside me
Inside my soul
It want to be occupied
There was this determined thing in here
She wanted to fix it
She think she needs a Mr.Fix it
To fight the darkplace
To occupy her emptiness
To stop the sting in here
She wasted all her time
For the Mr.Fix it
To help her walk off the hell
Boys came and left
None could fix it
She died lonely,
With the fear
Where was her Mr.Fix it?
To late to realise
A voice from her grave spoke up
I was my own Mr.Fix it
~Bryna Elliot

Answer 1

nice poem bryna

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lilaspie7
nice poem bryna
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Thanks

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bryna321
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lilaspie7
nice poem bryna
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Thanks
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yw

Answer 4

nice

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hunterrr
nice
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Thank you!!

Answer 6

u welcome👍

Answer 7

Woe

Answer 8

@pusheen @ghettowhoosh

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bryna321
@pusheen @ghettowhoosh
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😏😏😏😏😏😏

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @ghettowhoosh
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bryna321
@pusheen @ghettowhoosh
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😏😏😏😏😏😏
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lol

Answer 11

oop- this $hit hit different tho no cap

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hunterrr
oop- this $hit hit different tho no cap
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How?

Answer 13

idk but its a vibe

Answer 14

It's all of ours story

Answer 15

mhm

Answer 16

oop that's a low-key hit different poem tbh

Answer 17

i like it

Answer 18

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @elpapitocay
i like it
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Thank you!!

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
oop that's a low-key hit different poem tbh
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Its hit different to me also

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bryna321
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
oop that's a low-key hit different poem tbh
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Its hit different to me also
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fr though

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bryna321
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
oop that's a low-key hit different poem tbh
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Its hit different to me also
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fr though
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Yeah lol

Answer 22

Lovely poem, Keep up the good work, have a marvelous day

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CocoCammron
Lovely poem, Keep up the good work, have a marvelous day
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Thanks

Answer 24

Nice poem

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
Nice poem
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Thnx

Answer 26

Good job that's really good

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Lisaneedham
Good job that's really good
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Thnx

Answer 28

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bryna321
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Lisaneedham
Good job that's really good
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Thnx
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Ofc.

Answer 29

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bryna321
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
Nice poem
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Thnx
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np

Answer 30

Oop, Makes me hungry for change and look into da dark room. OOP

Answer 31

bry ur just so good at making poems and songs. I love it. Good Job!

Answer 32

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CancerGirl
bry ur just so good at making poems and songs. I love it. Good Job!
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Aww

Answer 33

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @ghettowhoosh
It's all of ours story
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😏😏😏😏

Answer 34

@Fro