Question

Staring...
Staring at an Unknown object..
Closing my eyes as It whispers to me...
Don't close your eyes
As I fell asleep into the tide
and the ocean pushed away fear and regret
I am tossed aside
With no way out....

I am running..
I don't know where I am going
but Ik she is following me
She's gaining up to me.
When I become fairly ill
She will come in for the KILL!

Answer 1

Idk what sub this is in rn, So don't judge.

Answer 2

It's misc so ig it's fine lol

Answer 3

but i like this good job :)

Answer 4

Wow!!

Answer 5

Ty, it's somewhat my style but I dunno abt how it sounds. I think i need to rewrite some stuff.

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
Ty, it's somewhat my style but I dunno abt how it sounds. I think i need to rewrite some stuff.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Yw

Answer 7

Nice poem