Question

A new poem By me! U_U

"Why so Jealous?"

Why so jealous? you ask.
My gaze meets yours then I glare back at the floor.
"Because I fear losing you."
"But you aren't going to," You say as you try to approach me.
I take a step back and shake my head.
"That's doesn't calm the feeling I get in my stomach when you speak to another girl, or even when she simply hugs you, even a flash of a smile. It scares me."
"People like you fall easily for the most beautiful things, so it's always going to be a what-if."
"But-" You say as I rudely cut you off.
"No, but's about it! I'm always going to be jealous all from the fear of losing you! I'm always going to bring it up all from being mad about it! Always! Always! Always..."

Answer 1

seems more like a song but it is good.

Answer 2

Nice poem,kinda confused on the deeper meaning though

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
Nice poem,kinda confused on the deeper meaning though
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It's aimed at my ex, that's why it may be confusing, I was cheated on countless times then once we got back together, he was tired of me being so jealous...

Answer 4

It's nice but it seems more like a story to me.

Answer 5

Thanks everyone!

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BabydollBlake
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
Nice poem,kinda confused on the deeper meaning though
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It's aimed at my ex, that's why it may be confusing, I was cheated on countless times then once we got back together, he was tired of me being so jealous...
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Sorry to hear that

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BabydollBlake
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
Nice poem,kinda confused on the deeper meaning though
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It's aimed at my ex, that's why it may be confusing, I was cheated on countless times then once we got back together, he was tired of me being so jealous...
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Sorry to hear that
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Its fine!

Answer 8

nice

Answer 9

well damm ain tha sum shii......its a good poem

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @babygirlarie
well damm ain tha sum shii......its a good poem
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thank chu!

Answer 11

dam i like the poem

Answer 12

i liked it it fire good job

Answer 13

I like it

Answer 14

otayy denn sisssssss

Answer 15

it's seem like a gud one

Answer 16

I've been cheated on countless times it does go hard tho

same

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @KingCooper713
I've been cheated on countless times it does go hard tho

same
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Some people don't know how to love us the right way, but hey, we'll find someone one day

Answer 18

yah bro

wait are u a girl or a boy cause I feel bad calling you bro

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @KingCooper713
yah bro

wait are u a girl or a boy cause I feel bad calling you bro
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Lol, I'm a girl and its fine

Answer 20

oh I'm sorry

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @KingCooper713
oh I'm sorry
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Its fine, no need to apologize

Answer 22

well i think i here a bunk callin my name

Answer 23

gn

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @KingCooper713
gn
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Lol gn

Answer 25

cool

Answer 26

thts gud

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TaaeRoku
thts gud
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Thanks

Answer 28

amazing

Answer 29

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashely
amazing
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Thank you!

Answer 30

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BabydollBlake
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashely
amazing
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Thank you!
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np