Question

this another song but i havent finished it yet

One minute you're here and the next you're nictitate
Ooh, when I go hugging
And when you're gone I feel splendid
Your words cut deeper than a sterling
When I'm with you, all I have is fine-looking thoughts

You must think that I'm golden
When I'm with you, all I have is pretty thoughts
Your words cut deeper than a holding

Answer 1

nice idk the tune thoe

Answer 2

Nice poem.

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Serenity1jackson
nice idk the tune thoe
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i wrote it

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @1982
Nice poem.
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ty

Answer 5

nice

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @carmelle
nice
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ty

Answer 7

great song keep up the great work

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lilaspie7
great song keep up the great work
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thanks

Answer 9

what would be the tune?

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @doglover12
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lilaspie7
great song keep up the great work
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thanks
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yw

Answer 11

not a song more like a poem but ts nice

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sak123
what would be the tune?
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hold on

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini01
not a song more like a poem but ts nice
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c minor

Answer 14

cool

Answer 15

thats gud soo far

Answer 16

it sounds good so far keep up the good work