Question

“Life”
While you Decline to Cry life lives,
The Ground shakes and sky falls but not one thing can change about how I feel,
As you sit there in tears your mind fills up with all the life worries,
As you wonder if your going to be good enough for him you cry and cry,
Not one thing will change in life I say,
life is full of sorrowful times and also happy times but you are just one of them,
a new light falls on the world around us,
on our experiences and relationships, intensifying the sense of everything we live what was left of us.

Answer 1

Thats so true about life nice wording lol your good at writing

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
Thats so true about life nice wording lol your good at writing
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thank you

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LandonGoma
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
Thats so true about life nice wording lol your good at writing
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thank you
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Yww hun lol

Answer 4

i really like good job

Answer 5

good work

Answer 6

very very good

Answer 7

good job

Answer 8

that was deep

Answer 9

Nice Poem

Answer 10

I liked it

Answer 11

Amazing, Great job!