Question

the Fate

you man who lives on earth
what do you expect from tomorrow?
how long does this rush last?
hurry up as you wish?
your earthly life is coming to an end,
the darkness covers you,
the rush is over
there is nothing left after you ...

Answer 1

That is really good.

Answer 2

@Laylalyssa

Answer 3

It's great!

Answer 4

@Jhonyy9 You're incredible *^* Don't you dare lie and say you aren't

Answer 5

This is very nice Q.Q It's Interesting, Leave's me In Awe.

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Downpour17
@Jhonyy9 You're incredible *^* Don't you dare lie and say you aren't
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,,incredible" - ty - but why ?

Answer 7

Because you're beyond talented *^*

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
This is very nice Q.Q It's Interesting, Leave's me In Awe.
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,,Awe" - why ?

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
This is very nice Q.Q It's Interesting, Leave's me In Awe.
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,,Awe" - why ?
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becuase it's interesting Q.Q and It makes me wonder. Q.Q

Answer 10

This is a very nice poem!

Answer 11

ok what you dont know about me and my life - when i was 23 yo - i ve had an accident after what i was 5 weeks in COMA - YES ! 5 WEEKS - so after i woke up from coma my left hand and foot was paralyzed so i was necessary learning to walk and use my hand - and these above wrote words - poems - come from somebody who returned in this LIFE - to give LOVE and who teach to everybody who have attention on his words how much is important the LOVE AND TO GIVE LOVE TO EVERYBODY ALWAYS !!!
- I M SO SORRY FOR MY ENGLISCH

Answer 12

Really makes you think of your own mortality, super good poem man

Answer 13

Good job @jhonyy9

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Timmyspu
Good job @jhonyy9
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TY

Answer 15

wow that's deep, good job

Answer 16

Once again, another great thing from you. The background you gave after really helps one understand the meaning. Sorry for your accident, but amazing job! Very deep, but I love it. Thank you for sharing <3

Answer 17

Very good, @jhonyy9 Very deep but I am loving it

Answer 18

whats up

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @KingCooper713
whats up
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NO spam please

Answer 20

Amazing job, Jhonny! keep up the great work. c:

Answer 21

@jhonyy9 are you the oldest user ? this does not include being active

Answer 22

@jhonyy9
Thats really good Ive been looking at all of your poems that you are posting and they are amazing.... I love that you keep posting I look at the time for them.... You have an amazing talent, Kepp up your great work!

Answer 23

Cool

Answer 24

That is a really, good poem, @jhonyy9

Answer 25

I felt this

Answer 26

Really good

Answer 27

i got diarrhea reading this, that's how good it is

Answer 28

Really nice poem keep up the Great work and it will pay off.

Answer 29

ah really nice bro i love it