Question

They say it's easier to let go
To let the pain flow from my veins
To get loosen rope from around my throat
To let the people that love me know
Im ok

im ok
I'm drowning
The pain is around my neck
Growing tighter and tighter
But if I let go
Who will catch me?
Im ok

But if i was ok
The rope would be cut
The pain would be nothing
I would be ok

Im not ok
The light growing darker around my eyes
The grip to reality slowly fading
And there is no one there to catch me
Im not ok
And its ok to finally let go.

Answer 1

Great job~!

Answer 2

NICE!!

Answer 3

wow! amazing

Answer 4

cool

Answer 5

wow

Answer 6

damn

Answer 7

😭😭😭😭😭

Answer 8

huh?

Answer 9

Nice bro

Answer 10

brocken </3

Answer 11

Sad <3

Answer 12

but lovely

Answer 13

awesome song

Answer 14

thanks... but its a poem

Answer 15

right lol

Answer 16

brocken 😣💔😣

Answer 17

how come when i make a poem i dont get this kind of energy i call bs

Answer 18

i will support yhur poems

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
Great job~!
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but when i make one "its ok"

Answer 20

thanks so much!! i gtg for today yall bye!!

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @imnotsmartlol
how come when i make a poem i dont get this kind of energy i call bs
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oml same.

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @imnotsmartlol
how come when i make a poem i dont get this kind of energy i call bs
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ok buddy

Answer 23

hahaha yall need to try harder lmao

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @imnotsmartlol
how come when i make a poem i dont get this kind of energy i call bs
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ok buddy
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dont ok buddy me

Answer 25

this is really good

Answer 26

ikr

Answer 27

wow, this is kinda sad. very deep. idk if this is personal to you, but i hope you're okay. I'm always here if you need it. Anyways, i like this a lot. Do you have any more things you've written?

Answer 28

good jon

Answer 29

do not let go

Answer 30

oop-

Answer 31

wow that was amazing poem but it was kinda sad

Answer 32

Noice

Answer 33

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
wow, this is kinda sad. very deep. idk if this is personal to you, but i hope you're okay. I'm always here if you need it. Anyways, i like this a lot. Do you have any more things you've written?
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yes lol i have writen i think two other things

Answer 34

i can relate to this, nice

Answer 35

I said this yesterday but I really love this poem

Answer 36

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @imnotsmartlol
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @imnotsmartlol
how come when i make a poem i dont get this kind of energy i call bs
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ok buddy
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dont ok buddy me
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...ok... person

Answer 37

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @moonlightinparis07
I said this yesterday but I really love this poem
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Thanks!

Answer 38

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
wow, this is kinda sad. very deep. idk if this is personal to you, but i hope you're okay. I'm always here if you need it. Anyways, i like this a lot. Do you have any more things you've written?
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yes lol i have writen i think two other things
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you can find them in my questions asked

Answer 39

OMG this is amazing!!!!!

Answer 40

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lily6219
OMG this is amazing!!!!!
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aaawww thanks lily!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 41

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lily6219
OMG this is amazing!!!!!
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aaawww thanks lily!!!!!!!!!!!!
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any time lol