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BabydollBlake:

Hey guys, I kinda started off with a rough morning and wanted to share a poem I made. Dear Mother, Am I not what you wanted?? Am I not what you expected? Do I not do enough for you? Look I'm- No, I can't say that I'll be blamed for talking back. I'm tired of running to my room and crying from being yelled at, blamed, hit for things that inst my fault! Mother do you see what you're doing to me?! What did I do to make you hate me?! I grew up in your image. Yes! I Toasted up a few times! But I'm still your daughter... Do you not want me? I'll leave to make you happy! You love the image of my sisters. Everything they do is so perfect! But look mom I got an A- "No I don't care, Blake, help your damn sisters" Sister: "Hey mom look I got an A!" Mom: "I'm so proud of you" THOSE MOMENTS HAUNT ME! Are you not proud of me?! IM TRYING! I'm Toasting trying... Just look at me! Then again you don't see me... I'm trying mother, I truly am... Just be proud of me!

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oaml.

BabydollBlake:

omg, the curse words! XD

Atarah2023:

Awwww...I felt this too deeply but good job sis <3

BabydollBlake:

Thanks sis!

Atarah2023:

Ofc ofc

mxddi3:

ahh, this is deep. i hope this isn't personal because ik exactly how this feels. If you need anything, i'm here. But, VERY nice. I love this. Keep it up <3

223tj:

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพguud job

BabydollBlake:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3 ahh, this is deep. i hope this isn't personal because ik exactly how this feels. If you need anything, i'm here. But, VERY nice. I love this. Keep it up <3 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Thank you, but yes it's very personal. But ill be sure to speak to you when I need help!

BabydollBlake:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @223tj ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพguud job \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Thank you!

kacchan:

wow good job

moonlightinparis07:

Sadly I understand all of this completely from my own life, expect with a step-mother because my mom lives in germany

BabydollBlake:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @moonlightinparis07 Sadly I understand all of this completely from my own life, expect with a step-mother because my mom lives in germany \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) I hope things get better

Ashely:

felt all the way down to my feet and my heart is underneath someoneยดs boot amazing job

MayBaby:

it's pretty good .

WendyMorales2007:

i felt that ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ™๐Ÿณ๏ธ

Brittlynn1019:

I can relater to this but just with my dad. Great job

mykelle33:

perioddddd

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