Question

Living without parents and sibling split across the world-
Colorado-
Looking at my plane ticket then
looking at my brother jaydn
Then my mom smiling and hugging me
We land and we all holding hands tight
It felt as if we were going down a rocky hill on a bicycle
We drive the rest of the way to moms house
We arrive and walk into my moms christmas decorated house
I unpack then go to my brother brayden’s room
The little baby's soft skin on his back and his curly afro shows
I say his name softly he slowly gets up and turns to me
He had indented lines on his face from his sheets
He gives me the biggest smile
And hugs me
I pick him up
His breath warm on my shoulder
It was like hugging a warm cotton ball
He makes me happy
He says my name very quietly
I take him downstairs for breakfast
But instead he just wants to show me all of his toys
Wrapped around my finger still
We put on coats and play with the white christmas snow
I hold him tight
Dreading the thought of the end of my visit and back to my home.

Answer 1

wow nice did you do this yourself?

Answer 2

Nice! I wish I could write like that!

Answer 3

Back with another one :)

Answer 4

your very talented you write like that

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @kacchan
wow nice did you do this yourself?
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yes

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @pumpkinpiee
Back with another one :)
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hahahahaha yes! imma try to do one everyday!

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @kacchan
wow nice did you do this yourself?
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yes
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wow its really good

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @kacchan
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @kacchan
wow nice did you do this yourself?
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yes
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wow its really good
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Thanks!

Answer 9

oop- nice

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @pumpkinpiee
Back with another one :)
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hahahahaha yes! imma try to do one everyday!
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I look foward to reading and commenting on them all:)

Answer 11

hahahah thanks!

Answer 12

i post these to get more fans cause................lol

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @kacchan
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @kacchan
wow nice did you do this yourself?
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yes
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wow its really good
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Thanks!
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your very welcome

Answer 14

amazing real talent i see

Answer 15

Wow.. I wish I had half the talent you do lol

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Convert
Wow.. I wish I had half the talent you do lol
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bet you do. just find a subject that makes you cry and write about it.

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Convert
Wow.. I wish I had half the talent you do lol
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bet you do. just find a subject that makes you cry and write about it.
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Nah I'm not that good at writing lol and I don't have much subjects that make me emotional :/

Answer 18

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Convert
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NevaehJade6219
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Convert
Wow.. I wish I had half the talent you do lol
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bet you do. just find a subject that makes you cry and write about it.
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Nah I'm not that good at writing lol and I don't have much subjects that make me emotional :/
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hmm message me ok?

Answer 19

if any of yall need help with writing text me (NevaehJade6219) or my editor LoveAngel91)