Question

"the moment we said hi"
The moment I seen it,
The moment I opened eyes,
Let in your eye lids,
took the life out of me,
I know what you're dreaming,
But honey you're not dreaming straight.
Suddenly things just happened,
we can't explain,
It's not even light out but you gone somewhere,
No hesitation,
no I've never seen you like anything scary before,
I don't like it,
I don't like it at all,
Just put back the car keys or somebody's going to get hurt,
Who are you calling at this time at night?
Sit down,
come round,
I need you all day every day,
We'll work it all out,
Together,
But your going nowhere tonight,
Now dream good,
I promise it will be all better soon in time,
It's not even like that,

Suddenly oh,
You got somewhere to go,
No hesitation oh,
I've never seen you like this.

Answer 1

is this a song?

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DaddyChulo42069
is this a song?
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no

Answer 3

did u make this?

Answer 4

i had some help

Answer 5

Oh wow this sounds like it could be a good song! If you made it I'm impressed with it and if you didn't it's still very good and if it isn't a song I still think it's a good poem and that you did a good job <3

Answer 6

thank you

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LandonGoma
thank you
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Ofc! :)

Answer 8

if u make it into a song can i hear it?

Answer 9

sure

Answer 10

yay

Answer 11

can u dm me rq?

Answer 12

i did

Answer 13

i would love to hear it to when you change it into a song

Answer 14

yayay ok

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LandonGoma
yayay ok
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:)

Answer 16

hehe

Answer 17

Gawd this touched me so hard

Answer 18

Gawd this touched me so hard

Answer 19

fr tho

Answer 20

sis never stop making poems Quotes Keep it up sis i love u

Answer 21

Good job landon!
Keep up the good work and I would love to here more from you

Answer 22

not bad

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @YECR
sis never stop making poems Quotes Keep it up sis i love u
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i did it cuz of how i feel

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LandonGoma
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @YECR
sis never stop making poems Quotes Keep it up sis i love u
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i did it cuz of how i feel
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Yh ik sis