Question

I just wrote this song hope you all enjoy!

Runs pretty nice
I look like I’m havin’ a good time but any fool can tell
Beautiful and pretty
Oh, I’ll twine with my mingles and waving black hair
I just shower and lay in bed
I never meant to push or shove you, do you know how much I love you
And Brush my hair indespare of what will happen again
Like falling rain
Feels like a fantasy
I’m crazy for trying and crazy for crying
I sing and write, through all night
And happiness I’ve known proves that it’s right
I just shower and lay in bed
For you I know I’d even try to turn the tide
And Brush my hair indespare of what will happen again
And only memories remain

Answer 1

I tryed my best hope y'all liked it :)

Answer 2

It's pretty good but it wouldn't be a song it would be a poem because all poems don't rhyme and this one doesn't rhyme but it is pretty good poem in my opinion

Answer 3

im gonna close this ig

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
It's pretty good but it wouldn't be a song it would be a poem because all poems don't rhyme and this one doesn't rhyme but it is pretty good poem in my opinion
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Some poems rhyme.

Answer 5

if yall think its a poem U_U

Answer 6

I think it's fine-

Answer 7

sorry ig bye U_U

Answer 8

I just said it's fine-
but ok-

Answer 9

noice

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @supie
I think it's fine-
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thank you 🥺🥺

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @supie
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
It's pretty good but it wouldn't be a song it would be a poem because all poems don't rhyme and this one doesn't rhyme but it is pretty good poem in my opinion
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Some poems rhyme.
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yea but not all they don't necessarily have to rhyme but you are right some poems do rhyme

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @supie
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
It's pretty good but it wouldn't be a song it would be a poem because all poems don't rhyme and this one doesn't rhyme but it is pretty good poem in my opinion
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Some poems rhyme.
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yea but not all they don't necessarily have to rhyme but you are right some poems do rhyme
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Ok then...

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @supie
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
It's pretty good but it wouldn't be a song it would be a poem because all poems don't rhyme and this one doesn't rhyme but it is pretty good poem in my opinion
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Some poems rhyme.
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yea but not all they don't necessarily have to rhyme but you are right some poems do rhyme
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welp its a song i wrote it to the genre a song

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashley29
noice
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thank you ashley

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashley29
noice
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thank you ashley
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ur welcome

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @supie
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
It's pretty good but it wouldn't be a song it would be a poem because all poems don't rhyme and this one doesn't rhyme but it is pretty good poem in my opinion
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Some poems rhyme.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yea but not all they don't necessarily have to rhyme but you are right some poems do rhyme
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welp its a song i wrote it to the genre a song
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I understand that but songs actually rhyme and this song doesn't rhyme so it's called a poem i legit gave you as compliment

Answer 17

great

Answer 18

a not as sorry I was typing to fast

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
a not as sorry I was typing to fast
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look, i am sorry i didnt look at it as a compliment

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
a not as sorry I was typing to fast
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look, i am sorry i didnt look at it as a compliment
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you good

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AccidentGeniusLondon
a not as sorry I was typing to fast
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look, i am sorry i didnt look at it as a compliment
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you good
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ong thanks

Answer 22

hello

Answer 23

i like it

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TrueGamer0731
hello
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thanks much

Answer 25

np

Answer 26

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TrueGamer0731
hello
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thanks much
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im good person

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TrueGamer0731
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TrueGamer0731
hello
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thanks much
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im good person
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i can see that

Answer 28

Love it, great job <3~!

Answer 29

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
Love it, great job <3~!
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ight thankss

Answer 30

thats a nice song you got there

Answer 31

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
im gonna close this ig
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do not close it is an amazing song this is real talent

Answer 32

nice

Answer 33

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashely
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
im gonna close this ig
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do not close it is an amazing song this is real talent
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haha thanks

Answer 34

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashely
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
im gonna close this ig
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do not close it is an amazing song this is real talent
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haha thanks
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np

Answer 35

Its nice!!!

Answer 36

I LOVE YOUR KNEW SONG

Answer 37

Pure talent tho

Answer 38

nice

Answer 39

sis ur good

Answer 40

it's good tho

Answer 41

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MayBaby
it's good tho
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True

Answer 42

nice

Answer 43

its pretttyyy goooddd

Answer 44

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217
its pretttyyy goooddd
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thank you sm

Answer 45

I CANT SPELL BUT ITS GOOD

Answer 46

Very Nice <3

Answer 47

niceee

Answer 48

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Skyler233
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217
its pretttyyy goooddd
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thank you sm
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Skyler you suck @$$

Answer 49

v

Answer 50

cool

Answer 51

neat

Answer 52

I LOVE IT!!! ^w^

Answer 53

this is really good
:) :)