Question

Answer check pls:

Which sentence includes an announcement phrase that should be eliminated to make the statement more concise?

-Assigning lockers to middle school students is an effective way to teach them time management.

-Lockers should be provided to middle school students so that they can learn time management.

-Middle school students would learn time management if they were provided lockers.

-This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management.

I think D, `This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management.`

Answer 1

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