Question

I don't know if I should consider this a poem or vent, or something along those lines. But it's called Sandcastle.

My life is like a sandcastle with three corners, one for love, one for family, one for myself. My family turned on me so I tried holding on to the sand left of it but it fell. Love is still standing, let me slowly reach for it. Shot, hurt, broken. All because you didn't care enough to protect that corner of the castle that haed your name written all over it. Catch it, its falling. But not to-....quick. Crumbled...it fell.... it's gone. I still have me! But wait, the people around me are knocking me down. Stay strong.....but I can't. But you have to! It's too late...I'm breaking....breaking...Broken. I depended on you to help me. I depended on you to love me. I depended on you to protect me and you couldn't do it...I can't help myself because your lies on being there all the time haunts me! It hurts so much and I can't take it...I cant...
My sandcastle's gone...

Answer 1

This shii deep dam😔

Answer 2

OMG I LOVE THis

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @therealedna
OMG I LOVE THis
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Thak you

Answer 4

you should be a poet omg this is actually so deep

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @therealedna
you should be a poet omg this is actually so deep
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You really think so?

Answer 6

nice

Answer 7

YESS

Answer 8

I- dhis is a good one tbh, buh deep .

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MayBaby
I- dhis is a good one tbh, buh deep .
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Thank you

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BabydollBlake
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MayBaby
I- dhis is a good one tbh, buh deep .
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Thank you
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you're welcome .

Answer 11

This is amazing it shows how vulnerable ppl can be and how much life is a group effort and when you don’t put in the effort the corners fall