Question

Dear brother, By Astrid Buterakos. (up for critisizm)

Dear brother,

If the world was a flower
I would let it shower
Over you
Because you made me feel bad too.

I don't want to lose what we once had.
We were friends but now were mad.
And all the things we use to say to each other...
I pretended you were my brother,

And after all this time
I will still climb
Up your window
I love you bro.

Ecen after you left me.
Because you did something bad.
I still see
A man I want to be.
Even if you get mad.
I will always be there...

Answer 1

Even*

Answer 2

I really like your work.

Keep at it!

Answer 3

Thanks,

I will try to.

Answer 4

Amazing Astrid *^*

Answer 5

*^* Ty *^*

Answer 6

nice poem

Answer 7

Ty

Answer 8

np