Question

sooo I made lyrics but I really don't like them, I was wondering if anybody could sing it..(only if you like it I wouldn't force anybody to do anything...)

Once upon a time
lyrics by SongCreator

Once upon a time- there was a sweet girl~
She lived in a house And she- loved herself...
Isn't that what you're supposed to do?
Blood is red and her shirt is blue she always loved herself-

And she said~
Don't talk to me
I don't want anything
With~ you-
I don't Want you~
tonight-
I don't love you-
Anymore~
Please just stay inside-

Once~ upon a time-
A girl loved to talk----about others~
But not~ in a good way-
She wasn't a prize herself-
she wasn't all that~
but She pretended like she was someone else~
But- she was no one
She betrayed herself~

Mmm~ ohh~
Mmm~ oooh~

Once upon a time-
There was no one~
They loved to talk~
Behind her back was a sweet girl~
She always loved to talk-
But in this way~
It was about herself-

Ohhh mmm~

I~
Love you~
But~ you don't-
I~
love you~
But you~ don't-
I want you~
To~
Sing a song-
I~
Want you~
To-
be alone-

Mmm~

Hello, this is 911 what's your emergency?
I want to love~
I want to leave you~
Talk to me~
Please don't break my heart-
Lay~
Your head- down in the night~
Please don't stay up- don't leave me tonight

It might be the end for us-
We don't have each other
Not anymore-
Please~
Hang up-

Answer 1

cool

Answer 2

this is my first time creating song lyrics and its sucks

Answer 3

noice

Answer 4

it cool

Answer 5

gtg

Answer 6

gb

Answer 7

nice

Answer 8

Pretty good!

Answer 9

ty I don't like how the song sounds tho😖

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SongCreator
ty I don't like how the song sounds tho😖
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I think it sounds pretty good!

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Xxbabyjas04xx
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SongCreator
ty I don't like how the song sounds tho😖
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I think it sounds pretty good!
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ty 😣

Answer 12

Np ;)

Answer 13

noiceee its better then what i can do

Answer 14

i like itt <3

Answer 15

tyy

Answer 16

good job <3

Answer 17

ty :D

Answer 18

yw

Answer 19

nice

Answer 20

its pretty nice hope someone posts it for u :)

Answer 21

ty!!

Answer 22

what beat you going for with it

Answer 23

i love iiiiiiit

Answer 24

<3 <3 <3

Answer 25

<3

Answer 26

verry long but i like it

Answer 27

yeah i was worried about that

Answer 28

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SongCreator
yeah i was worried about that
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its ok tho,,u dont want a super short song

Answer 29

It sounds good

Answer 30

id be glad to sing it if u want ^^

Answer 31

this song looks amazing

Answer 32

I also create songs :)

Answer 33

GOOD!

Answer 34

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Angie8723
what beat you going for with it
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HI Angie lmaooo

Answer 35

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @IsabelleCage123
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Angie8723
what beat you going for with it
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HI Angie lmaooo
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Hi

Answer 36

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Angie8723
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @IsabelleCage123
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Angie8723
what beat you going for with it
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HI Angie lmaooo
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Hi
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heyyy lol🤣🤣

Answer 37

sorry I wasn't responding ;-;

Answer 38

I need a beat and I will take anybody to sing it ;-;

Answer 39

NIceee

Answer 40

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SongCreator
I need a beat and I will take anybody to sing it ;-;
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I could lollll