Question

I got a poem for you guys.


Some reason I don't know why, these dark emotions trap the good ones inside. As my sensitive heart crumbles, my mind is at ease, as if I'm trapped in a bubble. Heart races side to side, wishing I was dead, hoping I stay alive. My eyes shut for these few last moments, memories flash like lightning in the ocean. Time. My time is running out. The thoughts of you erase from my mind, hoping I'll remember and not lose time. Wishing I could be there, right by your side. The day you left this Earth, the day you got the chance to actually fly.

Answer 1

Wow

Answer 2

ok wow it's great i think

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Sweetie145
ok wow it's great i think
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thank you

Answer 4

Thats really good, good job.

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashley29
Thats really good, good job.
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Thank you

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Sam63354
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashley29
Thats really good, good job.
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Thank you
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you're welcome

Answer 7

that's really good yo

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini01
that's really good yo
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thx

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Sam63354
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini01
that's really good yo
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thx
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np

Answer 10

If i dm you a specific topic do u think you could write a poem for me @Sam63354

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashley29
If i dm you a specific topic do u think you could write a poem for me @Sam63354
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sure

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashley29
If i dm you a specific topic do u think you could write a poem for me @Sam63354
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fs

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Sam63354
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashley29
If i dm you a specific topic do u think you could write a poem for me @Sam63354
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sure
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thx

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @WavyML
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashley29
If i dm you a specific topic do u think you could write a poem for me @Sam63354
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fs
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thx

Answer 15

very, very nice. the emotions put forth in this are great. Excited to read more of what you write (:

Answer 16

SAAAAMMM~~ WOW- this is amazing

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im wowed

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
very, very nice. the emotions put forth in this are great. Excited to read more of what you write (:
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thank you. good, because I have more to say.

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @KiWiPoP1
SAAAAMMM~~ WOW- this is amazing
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thank you

Answer 20

omg i love ur poem u should do more u are good at it im proud that u have minded of poem
follow ur dream and keep it up u are really good at it

Answer 21

ngl i had like a song rhythm going through my head while reading it -- it was amazing

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lilianamendez2
omg I love ur poem u should do more u are good at it I'm proud that u have minded of poem
follow ur dream and keep it up u are really good at it
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Thank You. I will continue to do more things like this.

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashely
ngl I had like a song rhythm going through my head while reading it -- it was amazing
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thank you. yeah, I kind of had a rhythm going through my head too.

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Sam63354
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lilianamendez2
omg I love ur poem u should do more u are good at it I'm proud that u have minded of poem
follow ur dream and keep it up u are really good at it
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Thank You. I will continue to do more things like this.
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np im glad u are doing more :)

Answer 25

i like ittttttttttttt <3

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I love it. Keep doin' whatcha doin'.

Answer 27

i love it

Answer 28

Wow i love it bro

Answer 29

love it tht fr touched me

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Sam63354
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashely
ngl I had like a song rhythm going through my head while reading it -- it was amazing
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thank you. yeah, I kind of had a rhythm going through my head too.
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well like i said it was amazing. amazing work