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I'm writing a song, & wanna know what y'all think... I'm still working on the ending. Feel free to comment.

Song title: Hidden
By~ Destiny Rose Greer
I’ve stayed hidden most of my life
Underneath this mask of mine.
Afraid of what people will think if I show who I am deep inside.
I’ve gotten hurt more times than I can count.
I pretend to be someone I’m not,
Yeah, I’ve gotten good at playin’ the part.
No one notices, no one can break down my walls.
Love me for who I am despite all of these scars.
Until you walked into my life, took away the darkness, and brought me into the light.
I finally feel like myself for the first time in my life.
Chorus:
Yeah, I hide who I am but you always see past my mask.
Keep telling me you love me for who I am,
Even when I did nothing to deserve it.
Who knew a guy like you would choose someone like me?
All my flaws and imperfections you want it all.
I don’t understand, how could I be the girl you want?
The shy girl with scars, bruises and mistakes.
(yeah Ooh)
But now you’re the key to my heart,
You’re the one that breaks down my walls.
The one who sees me for me and not someone else.
Yeah, I’m, oh I’m no longer hidden.
Verse 2:
You keep tellin' me I'm the best thing in your life.
And that caught me by surprise.
I'm nothing special but to you, I'm your everything.
When you brought me from the darkness, the hiding.
When you took my mask, I was finally free
I don't have to worry as long as you're with me.
I've never loved anyone this much
It's crazy how far I've fallen, fallen for you
Chorus:
Yeah, I hide who I am but you always see past my mask.
Keep telling me you love me for who I am,
Even when I did nothing to deserve it.
Who knew a guy like you would choose someone like me?
All my flaws and imperfections you want it all.
I don’t understand, how could I be the girl you want?
The shy girl with scars, bruises and mistakes.
(yeah Ooh)
But now you’re the key to my heart,
You’re the one that breaks down my walls.
The one who sees me for me and not someone else.
Yeah, I’m, oh I’m no longer hidden.

Answer 1

Wow thats nice

Answer 2

I mean alright👍👍

Answer 3

u do u buddy if u like it thats all that matters 👍

Answer 4

that was very nice👍

Answer 5

Thanks!

Answer 6

good job sis<3

Answer 7

I'm really glad u guys like it 🙌🙌🙌🙌💯💯💯🤣

Answer 8

Tysm bsf @Lisaneedham

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
Tysm bsf @Lisaneedham
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ofc!!

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Lisaneedham
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
Tysm bsf @Lisaneedham
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ofc!!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
:) XD

Answer 11

It's good.
like it.
Good job.

Answer 12

\(nice\)

Answer 13

goated

Answer 14

niceee

Answer 15

thxs smmmmm

Answer 16

its ight but its not more of my style

Answer 17

it's pretty good .

Answer 18

wow that beautiful wanna imagine what your voice like

Answer 19

I like it! You put lots of thought into it and it really shows.

Answer 20

thanks

Answer 21

tysm