Question

soooo i wrote a short song (called little girl) and sang it feedback?
here's the lyrics i'll put the recording below
lyrics:
Little girl
all alone
no place to call her own..
she's been lyin in her bed
no rest in her head
she's covered in tears
always drowning in fears...
and one day she says
mama dont hate me-
i've been thinking lots lately..
and i'm thinking that maybe-
it's time for me to go.....
i said, honey
you're my perfect little bunny
and i know you're so lovely
there's no need to go
no, no
there's no need to go...
you know this is your home..
come make it your own
we can set it in stone
there's no need to fear
you know im always right here
and trust me dear
i am always right here
i am always right... here

Answer 1

recording

Answer 2

i like your voice

Answer 3

sounds great btw

Answer 4

nice lyrics

Answer 5

thank you <3 <3

Answer 6

The song and your voice is great :D

Answer 7

Aweee, Teddy it's amazing. <3

Answer 8

the title sound like it was wrote by a creepy old man

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @brodiefailure
the title sound like it was wrote by a creepy old man
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Pizza

Answer 10

i-
l mfao*

Answer 11

ahhh i love itttttt

Answer 12

Hardcore goosebumps omg.

Answer 13

ahhhhh i love it your voice is magical

Answer 14

you have a great voice and I loved the lyrics I would actually listen to this on my playlist It's great

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @COLDESTshorty
you have a great voice and I loved the lyrics I would actually listen to this on my playlist It's great
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Fr

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ashely
ahhhhh i love it your voice is magical
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Fr fr

Answer 17

Like damn i love this i actually bookmarked the link XD

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literally I have bookmarked it

Lmao

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Cutie728
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @COLDESTshorty
you have a great voice and I loved the lyrics I would actually listen to this on my playlist It's great
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Fr
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yea Im dead serious

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @COLDESTshorty
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Cutie728
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @COLDESTshorty
you have a great voice and I loved the lyrics I would actually listen to this on my playlist It's great
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Fr
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yea Im dead serious
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Same i bookmarked it

Answer 21

I love the lyrics they were so wonderful I wish this actually became a song if you would like I can actually sing it and I can send it to you and I hope that encourage you to actually singing it! 🤍 and you might be thinking I'm trying to seal your song but no I am not I just want to encourage you to actually sing it because I bet you have a wonderful voice and I would love to hear the wonderful voice that you're hiding

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Totallyawesomebellal
I love the lyrics they were so wonderful I wish this actually became a song if you would like I can actually sing it and I can send it to you and I hope that encourage you to actually singing it! 🤍 and you might be thinking I'm trying to seal your song but no I am not I just want to encourage you to actually sing it because I bet you have a wonderful voice and I would love to hear the wonderful voice that you're hiding
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i actually have a recordng of me singing it, here
and thank you so much :)

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CuteTeddyUwU
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Totallyawesomebellal
I love the lyrics they were so wonderful I wish this actually became a song if you would like I can actually sing it and I can send it to you and I hope that encourage you to actually singing it! 🤍 and you might be thinking I'm trying to seal your song but no I am not I just want to encourage you to actually sing it because I bet you have a wonderful voice and I would love to hear the wonderful voice that you're hiding
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i actually have a recordng of me singing it, here
and thank you so much :)
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your welcome its so beautiful

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Bro this song was beautiful and it was also deep. Your song had some meaning to it <3

Answer 25

wow its really good (but i already told u this but pretend i dint), i love ur wonderful song. i wish i can sing like u.

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DEVIL
wow its really good (but i already told u this but pretend i dint), i love ur wonderful song. i wish i can sing like u.Lm f ao D
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Answer 27

ayo wanna colab ina song

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LilJakaRj
ayo wanna colab ina song
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sure why not, dm me

Answer 29

ok

Answer 30

sing Kumbaya next

Answer 31

It's really pretty. keep up the good work <33

Answer 32

I love it!

Answer 33

I like it a lot. I feel like at the end that it gets too slow and there are too many pauses throughout the song. I really like your voice and the overall song though.

Answer 34

nice

Answer 35

It sounds pretty sad but you are really good at writing songs I tried to write once but it was terrible! You know if you can sing really well maybe you could go on America's Got Talent!🤍

Answer 36

You have a beautiful voice!
It will take you very far in life If you use it :)

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OMG, I DIDN'T LISTEN TO THE VOICE RECORD SO SORRY YOU SOUND SOOO GOOD!!

Answer 38

it's pretty amazing

Answer 39

Oh My God this is amazing you should consider writing music or poems.

Answer 40

here... https://brainly.com/question/22031944
please just go there ryley. : /