Question

How this song I wrote so far?

Sittin here all alone,
Nowhere to go,
I’ve been watching you,
And you’ve been watching me,
You think these things make me me,
You think you get it,..

Well no you don’t!

Cause i’ve been watching for myself,
Yeah no you don’t!
You haven't seen the real me,
Yeah no you don’t!
You think I'm free,
But I'm still caught in the chains,
You think you have caught me,
But I'm still fallin,
Cause I havent hit the ground…

Ya da da da da da da,
Ya da da da da da da,

Yeah, I havent hit the ground…

You think I’m mean,
But I’m just getting started,
You say you protected me,
When i was the one who did,
I thought you were pretty neat,
I thought you were the one for me,
I thought i was protected,
I thought you were with me…

Yeah I was wrong!

Cause you were the dirty one,
Yeah I was wrong!
You only protected yourself,
Yeah I was wrong!
You think I’m free,
But I'm still caught in the chains,
You think you have caught me,
But I'm still fallin,
Cause I havent hit the ground…

Ya da da da da da da,
Ya da da da da da da,
Yeah I havent hit the ground!

Answer 1

pretty good

Answer 2

Can I sing it~?

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DumbFounded
pretty good
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thx i really needed that

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
Can I sing it~?
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sure but i was gonna sing it first since ya know i made the song.

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @P1n3appl31
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
Can I sing it~?
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sure but i was gonna sing it first since ya know i made the song.
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Go ahead xd I will just dm you the recording c:

Answer 6

okay

Answer 7

Nice I like ittt

Answer 8

Nice I like ittt

Answer 9

Noice

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxcokexx
Nice I like ittt
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I TrY. EvErY SoNg i HaVe MaDe SuCks

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @P1n3appl31
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxcokexx
Nice I like ittt
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I TrY. EvErY SoNg i HaVe MaDe SuCks
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Noo they dointtttt

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @P1n3appl31
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxcokexx
Nice I like ittt
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I TrY. EvErY SoNg i HaVe MaDe SuCks
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Noo they dointtttt

Answer 13

you havn't seen all of my songs so how do you kno?

Answer 14

this is the first song i ever wrote and put on here.

Answer 15

Because that one is nicee and I believe that it is nice 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

Answer 16

okay if you say so...

Answer 17

😊

Answer 18

Bye I'm fina go play roblox

Answer 19

XD

Answer 20

Loool

Answer 21

Bye

Answer 22

Bye

Answer 23

https://voca.ro/1021KUzBGDsZ finnaly finished recording it but i think i sound terrible with nintendo people around me

Answer 24

its doin good so far :P

Answer 25

kk

Answer 26

Very nice!

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
Can I sing it~?
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0-o lets hear it

Answer 28

great

Answer 29

Nice song I like it.

Answer 30

nicee

Answer 31

This wasn't the best I've heard but it reminds me of myself so I do suppose this song has some potential!🤍

Answer 32

👍🏻❤️

Answer 33

You should continue it. ^w^

Answer 34

it's pretty gud .