Question

Here's a song i wrote. I just want criticism.

I miss when mama told me, all the things that would comfort me. I miss when they said stay strong it won't be long now. Now I sit in my bedroom, wondering why I jumped over the moon for you. I start to see the mistakes that made me me.

Don't tell me that I'm weak. I already know all these things. I can't stay anymore, so stop calling at my door. I'm done. I give up. I can't wake on up. I'm not okay, I feel more scattered than a uncompleted puzzle.

I can't help but think, it was always me. I made you you fed up. I led you down, while you brought me up. Don't say I will be okay, cause I'm already gone.

Answer 1

no more

Answer 2

i dont wanna love you no more no mooooooore

Answer 3

NO MORE HHOEYYY HOEYYY HEEEEEY