Question

I’m not the best songwriter and I want to see of input about this song I’ve written.

Let the world be reborn again 🌎

Seems there is much pain to be corrupted

There isn’t much of love to be anointed

Why must we come to this vile time of self-destructionn

Haven’t we as a whole come to the realization of comprehending

That Love would be the cure and answer to all Humanity and Understanding

The world as we know is tired of all grieving pain and suffering it has endured

Now it’s time we have to make this change of our Hearts to bring peace and unity before it would be alllll overrrrrrr

Chorus: Because ... the world would soon need to be reborn againnnn I’m saying this of word to all should worship the love of our land Why disdain and envy exist inside of those destroy the purest minds of those to cause heartbreak

We must come to unify together to lend a helping hand

Before there wouldn’t time left because the world would need to be reborn againnnnn

Answer 1

This is all I got for now

Answer 2

nice bro

Answer 3

cap

Answer 4

Nice

Answer 5

Hm, so far it's pretty nice. I like the subject that you decided to write about. Very real topic, and a very great song so far. Maybe when it's done you could sing it? 0-0

Answer 6

Fo sho, it’ll take time to arrange it all together

Answer 7

it's good .

Answer 8

Nice job, we need a song like this! Love it, keep up the awesome work!!!!!! XD