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Feedback?

Hello, People, My friend, Fitz is writing a song. But he's too shy to post it, so he asked me to. Tell us what you think, below. It's called, "Prophet".

(this isn't all of it, only the beginning so far)


I just sick of the stuff people been tellin' me.
If you get a job, you can feed a family.
I don't care about the women or the cash.
I'm just trying to live my life, & make sure none of the chances are passed.

You can call me a prophet.
My whole life has been a protest.
A testimonial to which one lives by.
People be betting on their lives, yet they never die.
They're in it for the long ride.

People be getting into my head so that I can't decide.
Choosing between my family and my friends.
Caught in a web of lies.

Doing all I can so that I can cope.
Medication filling up my lungs.
Emotions feeling like an overdose.

Trying to escape from the thoughts inside.
Pain roaming through my head.
Depression clouding up my mind.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Angle
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Thank You. But I did write it as well.

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Sam63354
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Thank You. But I did write it as well.
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I guess I forget to mention that.

Answer 4

I was referring to the "lyrics go to writing section"

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Angle
I was referring to the "lyrics go to writing section"
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Wait, so just posting the lyrics, would go into the writing category instead of the music category?

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Sam63354
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I was referring to the "lyrics go to writing section"
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Wait, so just posting the lyrics, would go into the writing category instead of the music category?
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I was going to post the recording of it as well.

Answer 7

ah I see, a recording with it would be fine

Answer 8

I just didn't know how to post the link, within the post. So, I was going to post it in the replies section.

Answer 9

Is it okay, if I re-post this ^ and then post the recording as well?

Answer 10

yup!

Answer 11

Okay! Thank you! :)

Answer 12

it's pretty gud .