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Hello, People, My friend, Fitz is writing a song. But he's too shy to post it, so he asked me to. Tell us what you think, below. It's called, "Prophet".

Link Posted below.

(this isn't all of it, only the beginning so far)


I just sick of the stuff people been tellin' me.
If you get a job, you can feed a family.
I don't care about the women or the cash.
I'm just trying to live my life, & make sure none of the chances are passed.

You can call me a prophet.
My whole life has been a protest.
A testimonial to which one lives by.
People be betting on their lives, yet they never die.
They're in it for the long ride.

People be getting into my head so that I can't decide.
Choosing between my family and my friends.
Caught in a web of lies.

Doing all I can so that I can cope.
Medication filling up my lungs.
Emotions feeling like an overdose.

Trying to escape from the thoughts inside.
Pain roaming through my head.
Depression clouding up my mind.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

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on what.

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Sam63354
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Answer 4

nice

Answer 5

it's pretty gud .