Question

DM me if u r good at revising a research-based argumentative essay

Answer 1

Hi there!
If you wish for someone to revie your essay, you’re more than welcome to post it here and receive open feedback. :)

Answer 2

revise*

Answer 3

Yea, that's a good idea

Answer 4

Heres my Essay

The first one is that education is the main tool and way for progress. Thus if a country wants to ensure its future it has to ensure that the majority of children have access to education. The main way it can do that is by providing free education for them.

The second argument is that people with basic knowledge have proven that they have more tools and competencies to face the problems of their lives. Therefore, I a government wants to avoid supporting them as much as it can it has to ensure that it allows them to become independent adults capable of solving their day-to-day problems, or they will become dependant on the government.

The third factor is that education also provides critical and progressive ways of thinking to individuals. Therefore if a country looks to become better in every way in time. It has to provide its citizens with the tools to achieve it. The country will benefit from it indirectly. But it will be its best option. As countries like South Korea, Singapore, and Japan provided resources to their citizens to improve and they improved their countries.

Answer 5

I think this is a well-written essay; it emphasizes a point you’re making, and it uses formal words.

The only thing I’d point out is punctuation.
I see there’s a couple of areas in all paragraphs that either need punctuations, like commas, or areas that have periods rather than where commas should be, etc.

I’d recommend revising it yourself out loud and seeing if you can find those spots. :)
But great points!